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05/26/2006 07:04:27 PM · #1 |
This is page one of my new photo comic project. I would love to hear what you guys think. It is about a Private Investigator(a former detective) that gets in over his head. there is some bad language.
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05/26/2006 07:58:41 PM · #2 |
I like it so far - I think the processing you are using gives the images a nice photo/comic look. I might think about having harder edges on the frames - more like a comic book. I'm not 100% sure the feathering is working for me.
On the lower left frame I would suggest that maybe a shot of the back at 3/4 profile might work better - going from straight-on front to straight on back - and then a second straight on back - it kind of stops the motion that I get from the rest of the page. I think if you had more of a panning motion in addition to the shirt coming up it would work better. I don't know if I'm doing a good job of saying what I mean...
But anyway - I'd certainly go on to page 2! |
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05/26/2006 09:01:18 PM · #3 |
| I love it. I've never thought of a photo comic before, but what a great idea. |
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05/26/2006 09:24:21 PM · #4 |
pretty neat! I have not seen a photo comic before, but I like it.
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05/27/2006 06:34:34 AM · #5 |
Thank you all for your comments, and thank you very much joe for the in depth, if my photos all got critiques like that I would get better at the speed of light:)
anyonelse got anything to add?
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