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05/01/2006 10:20:36 PM · #1 |
I know the screening on the first one is pretty heavy - if you think it is too heavy then let me know. It's what I was going for but I'm just not quite sure it works...I hope it does.
  
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05/01/2006 10:23:53 PM · #2 |
very nice. I really like the feel to the 3rd one. Good stuff!
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05/01/2006 10:25:00 PM · #3 |
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05/01/2006 10:26:21 PM · #4 |
These aren't half nude :-P TEASE!
Actually they work for me. Not fond of the B&W on the last though. Fave is the second.
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05/01/2006 10:28:17 PM · #5 |
I don't like the pose on this (hands on breasts looks weird to me). Overall composition is pretty good - on th eright of the image th ecurtain in the BG could be cropped a bit tighter -lose the dark line on the edge of the image. Some catchlights in the eyes would help.
Second is best, pose wise but the lighting is a bit flat and dull, and perhaps a tad too bright.
last one is the most striking, but there is a nasty shadow between her eye and nose. and her hard throws a harsh shadow down the side of her face.
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05/01/2006 11:00:54 PM · #6 |
I'm no expert, but I really like the second and third. The first doesn't do much for me, and I agree with Prof Fate, the pose is a bit strange. However, the second looks really natural, and the third has real impact - not sure how to describe it, but something in her expression just makes me sit and stare.
Nice work man.
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05/01/2006 11:13:33 PM · #7 |
I'm not expert either, but what the heck is coming out of her butt in the second picture? No offense of course.
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05/01/2006 11:14:32 PM · #8 |
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05/01/2006 11:18:02 PM · #9 |
Originally posted by deapee:
I'm not expert either, but what the heck is coming out of her butt in the second picture? No offense of course. |
LMAO! I hope it's her foot :-)
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