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01/16/2006 12:16:24 PM · #1 |
C&C welcomed
Message edited by author 2006-01-17 08:17:24.
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01/16/2006 01:29:45 PM · #2 |
To the OP:
I like the concept, however I do believe that the sections of photos are a bit wider then they should be. The way the first two images are cropped, it plays a trick on my yes that is a bit off-putting.
Again, the concept is great.
Message edited by ClubJuggle - Removed reference to deleted post. |
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01/16/2006 01:33:32 PM · #3 |
i think its a very creative and joyful quadro(?)tich image
well done ! |
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01/16/2006 01:38:37 PM · #4 |
I think color toning could add punch to this image. The skin tones are slightly off to my eyes.
Ditto with Nelzie on the dentist comment. Jeesh. |
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01/16/2006 01:39:03 PM · #5 |
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01/16/2006 01:40:45 PM · #6 |
I think that's a great idea and a very good set of photos chosen as well. You can almost hear the laughter in the frame on the right and I would bet that she's letting out a real dirty laugh. It's always good to see people having fun.
The only small comment I have is that in the frame on the right, there appears to be a white blob to the right of the lady's head. It could be an earring or something, but I cannot make it out in this small version. Perhaps it could be cloned out?
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01/16/2006 01:53:04 PM · #7 |
I've looked at this a few times now, but still don't know how to comment.
There is something I like about it very much - the idea of it, the happy faces of your subjects, the whole feel of it.
Then there is something I don't like, but that is the part I'm not sure about. I think it has to do with the crops, i.e. exactly where and how each one was cropped.
I am sorry to be so vague.... I just know that I DO like it, but it could look better... more... umm....... right. |
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01/16/2006 01:58:01 PM · #8 |
It's a fun set of pictures and a great idea. It may be a bit oversharpened and the light from the left side of the frame seems to be a bit hot.
Message edited by author 2006-01-16 14:39:35. |
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01/16/2006 02:35:04 PM · #9 |
| personal attacks are not called for here. |
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01/16/2006 10:28:08 PM · #10 |
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Thanks,
Terry
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01/16/2006 10:30:46 PM · #11 |
| I like this but I think if you could end with both women in the final box it would be better. |
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01/17/2006 08:10:24 AM · #12 |
Thank you to the SC for 'cleaning' up the thread.
And for the rest for the comments and suggestion. I suddenly got this idea to make this multi image collage. My 1st try. Well i know there are room for improvement still! :)
FYI, the pic are taken with just modelling lights on with ISO 800
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01/17/2006 09:22:01 AM · #13 |
If you're going to use these models again, pay some attention to what the light is doing to the more upright one's teeth. I am assuming she's not missing a tooth, so what we seem to have is a projecting tooth casting a shadow, I don't know what; there's anyway an apparent gap in her upper teeth on her right side...
It's a great concept!
R. |
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01/17/2006 09:36:41 AM · #14 |
I think that the concept is very cool !
Hope you dont mind if this gets added to my wanna do list ;) |
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01/17/2006 12:09:48 PM · #15 |
thanks
Bear_Music, noted
n nomad469
feel free, i often get inspiration in DPC as well
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