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11/06/2005 02:44:09 AM · #1 |
A mothers love
A mothers grief
A mothers joy
Was incomplete
A moments breath
Snatched away
Now laid to rest
A shallow grave
A child's gift
A gracious hand
A yellow rose
With beauty grand
She lays it softly
On the stone
A quiet rememberance
For life unknown
With an innocent wonder
Her memory keeps
A youthful ponder
Why baby sleeps
Message edited by author 2005-11-06 02:45:55. |
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11/06/2005 11:43:06 AM · #2 |
ok take another look.
Message edited by author 2005-11-06 13:13:10. |
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11/06/2005 01:23:37 PM · #3 |
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11/06/2005 02:39:15 PM · #4 |
That's pretty good,
I must admit
Most poems I've read
sound like... um-- "Chit" :)
Nicely done, jsas. |
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11/06/2005 02:51:38 PM · #5 |
| jsas shared this with me earlier and I was really touched by it. Good stuff. It's great to see other areas of creative expression possessed by people on this site. |
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11/06/2005 03:06:26 PM · #6 |
| You're a gifted wordsmith, enjoyed your bio poem too. |
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11/06/2005 03:37:58 PM · #7 |
Thank You, its all about the inspiration and there is alot of talented inspiration on here.
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11/06/2005 06:28:24 PM · #8 |
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11/06/2005 07:02:58 PM · #9 |
Originally posted by lynnesite:
You're a gifted wordsmith, enjoyed your bio poem too. |
I agree, and would add that, although I never met him, you bear a resemblence to Ernest Hemingway
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11/06/2005 07:09:22 PM · #10 |
Originally posted by kpriest:
Originally posted by lynnesite:
You're a gifted wordsmith, enjoyed your bio poem too. |
I agree, and would add that, although I never met him, you bear a resemblence to Ernest Hemingway
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You say I have Ernest eyes, hope I won't meet his demise.
Thank you, that is an honor.
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11/06/2005 07:14:20 PM · #11 |
got bored today so i set it to music. if i didn't have my mics stored away, i'd record it for you... otherwise, you'll have to come to memphis to hear it...
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11/06/2005 07:24:01 PM · #12 |
Originally posted by kudzu:
got bored today so i set it to music. if i didn't have my mics stored away, i'd record it for you... otherwise, you'll have to come to memphis to hear it... |
That's awesome, I would love to hear it. Photography, Music and Poetry is a trilogy of artistry.
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11/06/2005 10:01:08 PM · #13 |
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11/07/2005 09:55:58 AM · #14 |
Originally posted by jsas:
That's awesome, I would love to hear it. Photography, Music and Poetry is a trilogy of artistry. |
i'll see if i can't dig a microphone out tonight or tomorrow...
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11/07/2005 07:01:25 PM · #15 |
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Originally posted by jsas:
A mothers love
A mothers grief
A mothers joy
Was incomplete
A moments breath
Snatched away
Now laid to rest
A shallow grave
A child's gift
A gracious hand
A yellow rose
With beauty grand
She lays it softly
On the stone
A quiet rememberance
For life unknown
With an innocent wonder
Her memory keeps
A youthful ponder
Why baby sleeps |
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