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Canon EF 24-105mm f/4.0L IS

10/09/2005 05:34:27 PM · #1

I took these last weekend,Lizi just got to them yesterday and today, i am really happy with my work, these i feel are my best yet, but i know there is alot of work that could be done and i rely on dpc to help me in that catagory.

mandyturner

Canon EOS-5D Mark II

10/09/2005 05:50:59 PM · #2

Pixel, Pixel Pixel? Did you resize them before downloading?

hanneke

Canon EOS-5D Mark II

Canon EF-S 17-55mm f/2.8 IS USM

10/09/2005 05:56:08 PM · #3

I saw they are .gif

don't think that's for the better ;)

jpochard

Canon EOS-40D

10/09/2005 05:58:16 PM · #4

Pretty model and good location! I like number 19 the best, due to the lighting and the composition. Although, I would like her right hand to not be cut off.

Many of them look really orange in the skin tones to me. I know the sun will give that "golden" look, but this looks too orange for my tastes. The compositions are not what I would choose for the most part, but I'm not a guy :) I'm not sure what I would do differently. The ones with her on her back look a little odd because of the open space under her back. She doesn't appear comfortable at all. Did you or the model choose the poses and is she an experience model? You might try some poses where she's not trying to be so super sexy, but again...I'm not a guy, so perhaps those seem more natural to the guys - but they look like she's trying too hard to me.

I'm glad you are really happy with them. It's such a nice feeling when they turn out the way you want! Hope this is helpful.

10/09/2005 06:06:30 PM · #5

I also noticed the orange tone to them but im not experienced in photoshop enough to chang her skin tone, and your right, i was in such a rush to post them i forgot to chang them to jpeg. I resized them to them to 640X127 and at 150KB.

hanneke

Canon EOS-5D Mark II

10/09/2005 06:10:18 PM · #6

to me it looks like you've got the whitebalance wrong at the sunny side. the others seem to be ok, shot in the shadow with shadow wb (correct me if I'm wrong).

10/09/2005 06:14:35 PM · #7

I was shooting in AV, at 5.6, i had my 580 EX for a fill flash, i kept it that way the whole shoot. the white balance was set to auto, i need to get a grey card, i think that would creat a better photo right.