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09/10/2005 10:56:13 PM · #1 |
trying something new comments would help |
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09/10/2005 11:02:11 PM · #2 |
It has a really nice feel to it! Great contrast. I like the night sky. On my monitor it looks a bit oversharpened, and oversaturated though. Good work though.
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09/10/2005 11:13:33 PM · #3 |
I think the dark is too dark.... but I love the stance and the view.
Hey, what about this bad boy....
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09/10/2005 11:24:16 PM · #4 |
Originally posted by arsenal:
trying something new comments would help |
Try cropping the right side to make the players fill the horizon, and take some off the top an bottom while you're at it. This brings the coach into better view.
P.S. - do something about the halo around the coaches legs.
Message edited by author 2005-09-10 23:25:16.
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09/11/2005 12:34:28 AM · #5 |
Originally posted by arsenal:
trying something new comments would help |
i REALLY like the composition...but like they said...maybe a little over-sharpened? I like the nice deer and rich colors too.
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09/11/2005 12:49:24 AM · #6 |
Originally posted by kiropractic:
Originally posted by arsenal:
trying something new comments would help |
i REALLY like the composition...but like they said...maybe a little over-sharpened? I like the nice deer and rich colors too. |
Man. that must be some monitor you have if youc an make out a DEER in that picture... Doesn't show on mine...
But seriously, I like this image a lot but feel it has been oversharpened by a HUGE degree. I'm not real sold on the utterly empty, artifical black of the sky either; I wonder what was in the original to work with? A hint of texture or depth would be nice I think.
Robt.
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09/11/2005 04:40:49 AM · #7 |
Well, the deer is right behind the giraffe but in front of the hippo.. :) - I'm guessing deer was a typo, but not sure.
Other than the sharpening issue, I think the deep black works well.. and I enjoy the horizon being in the middle, considering the dark black in the upper half and bright yellow in the lower half.
I wish the contrast (especially the shadows) wasn't so strong on the people, though. Perhaps if you managed a similar effect on the background/grass while lessening the effect on the people.
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