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08/13/2005 04:11:42 PM · #1
Hello,
I took some advice and cropped a little "distraction" off bottom left.

Comments needed and welcomed !

Thanks



Message edited by author 2005-08-13 16:14:33.
08/13/2005 04:51:44 PM · #2
You did a great job of shallow depth of field in the background. I always have trouble getting my background to be undefined, which you did well here. I also like the little bit of soft focus on the lower right wing. The exposure is very good and I see no grain or noise. I think you cropped it just right.
08/13/2005 04:57:29 PM · #3
Hello,

Unlike you, I sometimes get too "little" depth of field when I want more! This one just seemed to work well!

Thanks Lady...

Originally posted by ladymonarda:

You did a great job of shallow depth of field in the background. I always have trouble getting my background to be undefined, which you did well here. I also like the little bit of soft focus on the lower right wing. The exposure is very good and I see no grain or noise. I think you cropped it just right.
08/13/2005 07:59:58 PM · #4
Just a bee bump to get some more input...thanks.
08/14/2005 11:08:58 PM · #5
Last bump for my B.

Critque....with pointers....
08/14/2005 11:21:18 PM · #6
Im not a professional or anything, so don't take my comments seriously or anything... I think maybe you could have burned the petals a little bit to get a bit more detail in the petals, and get the glare off the bottom left petal. Maybe you could have dodged out the shadow on the top left petal. Other than that, all good!
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