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08/11/2005 11:09:06 PM · #1 |
Can some please critique this for me. I have the first one up for sale, and the second in the approval process. The first one I have at 11x14, the second I will have at 4x5,8x10,16x20. Have I over processed the second? Please let me know what you think.
 
EDIT: desaturated red a little. Is that better or do I need to do something else!
Message edited by author 2005-08-11 23:46:57.
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08/11/2005 11:41:33 PM · #2 |
| The red in the second one seems over saturated, but everything else looks good. |
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08/11/2005 11:47:44 PM · #3 |
I desat the red a little like J_Ehrat suggested. Is that better?
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08/11/2005 11:50:33 PM · #4 |
| Left a comment on both pictures. |
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08/12/2005 12:05:03 AM · #5 |
I have taken SDW65 adviced and darkened all but the waterfall and waterflow in the lake. I used a burn layer and erased what I didn't want burned. Is this better?
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08/12/2005 01:03:09 AM · #6 |
I didn't see the other iterations so don't really know how this has progressed, but I think the second is a little dark, and grass is a little too saturated. I'm guessing it's the burn layer. Try fading the opacity of the burn layer to somewhere between what it is now, and the other shot posted.
edit: Also, forgot to say I think it's a great shot. Interesting bridge, and the long exposure is really nice.
Message edited by author 2005-08-12 01:04:09. |
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