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07/13/2005 11:46:04 AM · #1 |
I've been working in Iraq for the past 10 or so months and I was sent to the states for a week of training... long story short, I was able to get into a studio to do a photo shoot while I was back... only problem, what to shoot. After a lot of sweet talking and arm twisting... I was able to get my less than excited girlfriend to pose for me. Let me know what you think.
   
   
And my crude drawing of the lighting set up... sorry, forgot to take a picture of that:
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07/13/2005 12:10:12 PM · #2 |
think they look great! Nice soft lighting. Only criticism from me is that the eyes look slightly oversharpened?
cheers
alex
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07/13/2005 12:16:46 PM · #3 |
I find them all to be quite well taken and post-processed.
The only one that I do not care for is the one labeled Untitled-164, she should have a different look on her face, it just doesn't sit very well. I think it would work better with a smile on her face and "smiling" eyes, instead of the very serious look she has. |
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07/13/2005 12:25:58 PM · #4 |
| They look real good. Only comment, take a look at # 2, 4 & 6. Notice how much more alive they look. Not look at the catch lights in the eyes and compare them to the other shots. Take the extra time from the camera position and make sure the eyes have good catch lights like the 3 above. |
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07/13/2005 12:47:02 PM · #5 |
Thanks for the comments... all well received. Great information and exactly what I'm looking for.
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07/13/2005 01:21:45 PM · #6 |
| I commented on most of them. (6 I think) Hope you don't think I'm 'bashing' your shots...they are awesome. Just has a few observations that 'could' be different. I definately couldn't do any better. Great work, something to be proud of. |
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07/13/2005 01:31:56 PM · #7 |
Originally posted by hbunch7187:
I commented on most of them. (6 I think) Hope you don't think I'm 'bashing' your shots...they are awesome. Just has a few observations that 'could' be different. I definately couldn't do any better. Great work, something to be proud of. |
Heather... thanks for the great observations and time consuming critiques... very appreciated. |
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07/13/2005 05:39:08 PM · #8 |
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07/13/2005 05:43:04 PM · #9 |
Very well done! But I can still see the marks where you twisted her arm... you brute! :) Also #4 I have to say that the expression and the ilt of her head kinda kills the shot. Other than that they're great.
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07/13/2005 05:49:39 PM · #10 |
Maybe this is a dumb comment, but it seems to me that the bra she's wearing is just too "massive" compared to her thonge, especially in the four pictures where you see the back and side of the bra. She has absolutely beautiful eyes.
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07/13/2005 09:36:08 PM · #11 |
I think you should have been chatting up a storming, telling her how gorgeous and sexy she was the whole time you were shooting. I think you might have ellicited a smile (similar to the one in the last photo) a lot more often.
I like the last one best. More for her smile than anything else.
The first one on the last line is also nice (she's not smiling as much, but it's there). Main thing I don't like has already been mentioned... that bra just doesn't fit the scene. The last photo works because she has more on. So she probably needs either more on or less ... so long as it's balanced.
Message edited by author 2005-07-13 21:36:39.
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