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07/07/2005 11:55:15 AM · #1 |
Here's another portrait attempt of my friend's daughter...
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if anyone has time would you please offer any comments or suggestions ... i'll return the favor :)
thanks..
PS - besides removing the crumbs on her cheek :)
Message edited by author 2005-07-07 11:56:38.
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07/07/2005 12:00:32 PM · #2 |
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Cute little girl! |
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07/07/2005 12:07:02 PM · #3 |
| The left side seems a bit hot. The catch lights are in a great spot in the eyes. The only think I would do is get a thin translucent material to act as a scrim and place it between your subject and with window. That will take the lines out of the catch lights and soften the light. |
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07/07/2005 12:26:11 PM · #4 |
left comment on second one it goes for the first one too great work
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07/07/2005 12:29:02 PM · #5 |
Amy, what lens did you use to shoot these? If it was relatively wide angle they may have looked better with a more telephoto lens stood further away.
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07/07/2005 12:37:43 PM · #6 |
Nice images, good composition, focus, DOF.
This is a case in which shooting RAW will really open up possibilities. The RAW conversion will allow separate control over both the highlight and brightness/midtones to help get rid of some of that "hotness" that was mentioned.
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07/07/2005 12:38:08 PM · #7 |
i used the kit lens with the rebel - and i was sitting on the couch with her... the lighting was just the window and sunlite ...
thanks for the suggestions .. overall i am fairly happy with them
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