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05/24/2005 05:54:15 PM · #1

Howdy all,

Looking for a critique of this shot that came from a series with my daughter. Many shots were taken at this sitting of which there are about 8-10 I really like.

My personal style involves lots of natural light, balance, natural beauty (not over posed), while still trying to capture that 'something' that makes a portrait style shot 'pop'. Still defining and adjusting my style and adding/subtracting to it all the time. As such, I would like your input on this shot, technically, photographically, artistically, etc. etc. You know the routine. Thanks for any response.

Jeff

//www.dpchallenge.com/image.php?IMAGE_ID=181607

Message edited by author 2005-05-24 18:00:43.

Canon EF-S 15-85mm f/3.5-5.6 IS USM

05/24/2005 05:56:05 PM · #2

Hmmm, how do you get it to show in the post instead of just the link?

ashishkushwaha

Canon EOS-7D

05/24/2005 05:56:55 PM · #3

How can i see the photos ?????

gaurawa

Canon EOS-5D Mark II

Canon EF 24-105mm f/4.0L IS

05/24/2005 05:58:16 PM · #4

Originally posted by Hoser:

Hmmm, how do you get it to show in the post instead of just the link?

Hoser, I don't see any images in your portfolio. Did you upload it to 'Workshop' folder ?

Canon EF 24-105mm f/4.0L IS

05/24/2005 06:01:08 PM · #5

How about now?

gaurawa

Canon EOS-5D Mark II

05/24/2005 06:02:10 PM · #6

Originally posted by Hoser:

How about now?

Nope.
//www.dpchallenge.com/profile.php?USER_ID=10334
this is your profile and it has no frame for your portfolio photos

justine

Canon EOS-50D

Canon EF 28-135mm f/3.5-5.6 IS USM

05/24/2005 06:02:22 PM · #7

The link works fine.
Darling pose and she's really a cutie.

05/24/2005 06:05:53 PM · #8

Ok, now it should work ..... but how do you get it to display without having to use the link?

Thanks

Jeff

Tamron SP AF 28-75mm f/2.8 XR Di for Canon

05/24/2005 06:43:45 PM · #9

Originally posted by Hoser:

Ok, now it should work ..... but how do you get it to display without having to use the link?

Thanks

Jeff

Go to the photo and copy the ID number at the end of the url. Then use the

icon at the top of the post reply box and paste the ID number in the box.

Sony SAL-50F14 Normal 50mm f/1.4 Autofocus Lens for the Sony

05/24/2005 06:47:15 PM · #10

A HA!!!! Thanks MK!!!!!

Ok, here is the photo for review, any/all input appreciated:

Jeff

ladyhawk22

Sony DSLR-A700

05/24/2005 07:12:33 PM · #11

I really like this shot :-) The style you're talking about is my favorite for portraits...sort of a candid portraiture. Very well done, and I think you're acheiving the style you're looking for!

jmoore

Canon EOS-1D Mark II

05/24/2005 07:28:01 PM · #12

Jeff I am a childrens photographer and I definatly think you are on the right track. I think the light on her face is lovely, but the light on her feet is much to bright and that is the first thing my eye went to. You need to use a bigger diffusion panel or shoot in shade. I feel like she is still a little to posed for my taste, but everyone like different things. Her feet are also distracting not only because of the light but because they look like they are growing out the back of her head. If you want to have feet up then move to the side a little so they are not right behind. Get closer, parents want to see those perfect faces. But her facial expression looks like a real sime and she is just beautiful. Check out my website if you like, it is all children. If you ever have any questions feel free to email
Jamie
//www.jamiemoorephotography.com

05/24/2005 07:41:03 PM · #13

Thanks for the comments Jamie. I didn't think the light on the feet were that distracting, I was worried more about the light off her arm ... and I didn't use any diffusion. Regarding her feet "growing" out of her head, a couple of the other shots I have are more off to the side, so I understand what you are saying. I thought the DOF would reduce the distraction level of that. Point taken. Thanks again for the input/tips ... I will visit your site.

Jeff