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05/21/2005 02:26:32 PM · #1 |
I wanted to get some feedback before I printed this for a client...
Please be (somewhat :) ) critical. This is sort of important for me !
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05/21/2005 02:28:21 PM · #2 |
can you post a larger version with detail on the bike? it looks like sloppy PS work around the bottom, but it's hard to tell at this size.
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05/21/2005 02:32:41 PM · #3 |
when I go fairly large with it ... it is kinda weak on the bottom... I am cleaning it now
Thanks
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05/21/2005 02:38:50 PM · #4 |
Fadeout of the BG bike looks weak lower right also.
R.
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05/21/2005 02:41:02 PM · #5 |
Originally posted by bear_music:
Fadeout of the BG bike looks weak lower right also.
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I agree, along the lower fairing -- looks white.
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05/21/2005 02:54:46 PM · #6 |
Sweet. I could see the finished product in an ad somewhere. Nice composition.
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05/21/2005 03:22:36 PM · #7 |
Darkening the larger one would be my take.
Message edited by author 2005-05-22 02:14:50.
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05/21/2005 03:25:14 PM · #8 |
| Left a comment. I like what rblanton did. |
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05/21/2005 03:29:09 PM · #9 |
Originally posted by BlackDot:
Left a comment. I like what rblanton did. |
I agree. Then your eye is drawn more towards the bottom than the upper left corner. |
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05/21/2005 03:36:05 PM · #10 |
I like rblanton's bg, but my eye would prefer to see the bg slid up a bit, maybe to get the BMW logo about one third from the top. ???
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05/21/2005 10:37:56 PM · #11 |
Well ... disasters do happen...
After I posted the last time ... photoshop decided to lock up on me :(
So I lost a couple of hours of work ... Oh well...
But here is the lastest... The text style will be modified by the graphic designer but it will look something like this...
I do have a question...
What is the best way to get rid of the reflections on the light and front of the background image ...
The client does not seem to mind but it makes me nutz.
Any other suggestions are welcome ... and thanks ever so much to everyone for your input.
;)
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05/21/2005 10:40:49 PM · #12 |
I would take the text out.
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05/21/2005 10:45:26 PM · #13 |
I just did the text as a filler from what I was given...
as I said ... It will look different after the designer gets a hold of it.
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05/21/2005 10:59:11 PM · #14 |
The first one looked much better.
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05/21/2005 11:37:51 PM · #15 |
From an artist's point of view:
If you do insert text, any color that appears only once (ie. green text) should appear at least three times, to create balance. Also, there might be more contrast with the green. Either lighter or with a border. |
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05/21/2005 11:39:35 PM · #16 |
| i second deapee's comment |
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05/21/2005 11:43:42 PM · #17 |
| I think this image looks great as is. Looks professional to me. |
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05/21/2005 11:50:59 PM · #18 |
Augggg... LOL
The client just loved the 2nd one...
I hate to say it ... but I like the first one better also... a little smoother ...
He said to his 18-25 demo... the 2nd would be more eye catching, more agressive ... I'll give him both ... he'll give me a check :) Live goes on.
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05/21/2005 11:53:26 PM · #19 |
| In the second, the background feels almost threatening to me, diminishing and overpowering the bike. |
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05/22/2005 12:24:52 AM · #20 |
| Somehow I like the first one better - in the second I think the reflections in the light in the background are minimal - but the reflections near the rear tire of the bike make it seem uncrisp to me. Also the main wording seems to overpowering to me - people will read it if it were smaller anyway as I think the composition is very good. |
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