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 05/10/2005 09:59:19 AM · #1
Hello :)
I need help cleaning out my portfolio in order to eleminate clutter. Plz be honest with C&C... I know I need to learn a lot. Also need to improve this image before I enlarge it. Kindly have a look at both and help me face lift my portfolio.
.... not sure if I need crop or stich anohter picture with it....something is missing!
Thanking u in anticipation.
 05/10/2005 10:08:13 AM · #2
Put the blue back in the sky if it was there to begin with and see if that helps. Just a suggestion.
 05/10/2005 10:08:27 AM · #3
added comment...hope it helps :o)
 05/10/2005 12:03:11 PM · #4
Originally posted by rex:
Put the blue back in the sky if it was there to begin with and see if that helps. Just a suggestion.


It was a cloudy grey day, didn't have much color is sky :)
 05/10/2005 12:05:29 PM · #5
Originally posted by smilebig4me1x:
added comment...hope it helps :o)

Thanks :)(big smile)
I shall try to find next picture to stitch on the right side. I do feel its missing something , may be thats what it is, lets see :)
Thank you so much for ur kind input.
05/10/2005 12:27:55 PM · #6
Originally posted by Nonage:
Originally posted by rex:
Put the blue back in the sky if it was there to begin with and see if that helps. Just a suggestion.


It was a cloudy grey day, didn't have much color is sky :)


I kinda figured that. It is a beautiful photo. I was just wondering.
 05/10/2005 12:44:35 PM · #7
What about a tighter crop like this:
 05/10/2005 02:34:48 PM · #8
Originally posted by ty_roni:
What about a tighter crop like this:


I thought about it but need a landscape style picture instead of portrait. This crop works good otherwise just to keep picture intersting. Thanks Roni :)
 05/10/2005 02:44:18 PM · #9
What about these with snow covered hills? Are these any better and what should I do to improve? Sky is blue and cloudy in one, but if I let sky stay blue, picture doesn't look black and white anymore.

Any suggestions?
05/10/2005 02:45:55 PM · #10
Originally posted by Nonage:
What about these with snow covered hills? Are these any better and what should I do to improve? Sky is blue and cloudy in one, but if I let sky stay blue, picture doesn't look black and white anymore.

Any suggestions?


The second of these I feel gives a good sense of place. The one on the left I believe is cropped too tightly.
 05/10/2005 02:47:06 PM · #11


This one!
 05/10/2005 03:30:33 PM · #12
Originally posted by Nonage:
What about these with snow covered hills? Are these any better and what should I do to improve? Sky is blue and cloudy in one, but if I let sky stay blue, picture doesn't look black and white anymore.

Any suggestions?


i like the second one best..gives more "feeling" to the photo IMO
 05/10/2005 03:46:35 PM · #13
I like your picture but it seemed as if the buildings was not popping out at me. Even though I'm not a fan of selective Desaturation I think in you photograph it worked. But I was wondering what would happen with a different tone. I hope you don't mind but here is an edit to see what it would look like. Let me know what you think?
05/10/2005 04:52:06 PM · #14
Nice work Scott.....It looks good to me.
 05/10/2005 04:54:29 PM · #15
Originally posted by SDW65:
I like your picture but it seemed as if the buildings was not popping out at me. Even though I'm not a fan of selective Desaturation I think in you photograph it worked. But I was wondering what would happen with a different tone. I hope you don't mind but here is an edit to see what it would look like. Let me know what you think?


I like that, it makes it more dramatic!!!
 05/10/2005 05:02:49 PM · #16
Originally posted by Nonage:
Hello :)


I love the original!
 05/10/2005 08:12:10 PM · #17
Originally posted by SDW65:
I like your picture but it seemed as if the buildings was not popping out at me. Even though I'm not a fan of selective Desaturation I think in you photograph it worked. But I was wondering what would happen with a different tone. I hope you don't mind but here is an edit to see what it would look like. Let me know what you think?


I do like the melanchony feel of it, except that sepia tone is almost close to original rock color. Here is the original one.


05/11/2005 07:39:27 AM · #18
Bump :)
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