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05/05/2005 09:25:24 PM · #1 |
This is a shot I took of my friend. The shot was taken in front of at train tunnel. I really like the way this came out, but since I don't normally do portraits, could I get someone good at this type of photography to crique this. Thanks!
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05/05/2005 09:50:28 PM · #2 |
| Bump - anyone have any comments? |
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05/05/2005 10:03:36 PM · #3 |
I'd try to get the tunnel more in focus with a greater depth of field. Being an outsider (i.e. I wasn't there to have previous knowledge of what was in her background), the tunnel opening and rails makes it look like some sort of funky two legged green lamp. If the rails and opening were in focus, I'd be able to tell what it was without needing to read your summary.
Just my $0.05 worth ;) |
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05/05/2005 10:07:08 PM · #4 |
Her face seems to be a bit out of focus. I agree with the DOF that Rob mentioned. I would like to also see a tightier crop but other than that its a good photo.
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05/05/2005 10:17:54 PM · #5 |
| Ray, I left you a comment on the photo.:) |
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05/05/2005 10:21:11 PM · #6 |
| Thank you all for the comments. Roni, I bumped-up another thread I did on some statue shots I took, I don't think you saw this thread. If you get a chance check it out, this is a very cool place. Take care and thanks again, Ray |
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