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04/08/2005 08:46:08 PM · #1 |
Got this today. I was going to turn to b&w but I liked the colors. What do you think?
Travis
Message edited by author 2005-04-09 08:32:59.
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04/08/2005 09:08:08 PM · #2 |
Pretty good except for the road in the picture. I would have walked a few steps forward to remove the road and then maybe zoomed in a little bit more to include just 1/2 of the trees that you have now. I like the mixture of trees and buildings however.
The landscape may be a little dark. Love the nice blue sky and clouds however.
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04/08/2005 09:16:38 PM · #3 |
| Travis, Nice work! I left you a comment. :) |
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04/08/2005 09:22:27 PM · #4 |
| I like the colors, too. It would really lose something in black and white, I think. |
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04/08/2005 09:23:21 PM · #5 |
I agree with the road problem. One other thing I would suggest is to try some different times in the day. The dark shadows under the overhangs drew me in. If you could get some detail to show up in that area, it might make for a better picture.
Then again, it's still better than my work, so I don't know if what I said even makes sense. |
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04/08/2005 09:26:38 PM · #6 |
Very nice Scene, I would agree with With Chris that taking another step to eliminate the road would make this a much nicer shot, and either a camera setting adjustment or taking at a different time of day to get some sun on the barn itself, shows up a little to dark. Well worth the stop to take this Photo, a real eye Catcher.
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04/08/2005 09:29:58 PM · #7 |
Travis, Very nice capture. I do agree that it would of been better if the road would of been out of the picture. I hope you didn't mind but I did a quick edit to see what it would of looked like without the road keeping the same ratio.
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04/08/2005 09:31:52 PM · #8 |
| Scott, That's great work! |
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04/09/2005 08:26:27 AM · #9 |
Thanks for the comments, Your right it does look better without the road. Thanks for the tips.
Travis
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04/09/2005 04:44:01 PM · #10 |
I like this! You might try putting the barn structures lower to rest on a "third" node, and then including more sky. It's right in the middle, right now.
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04/09/2005 05:02:48 PM · #11 |
| I'm sorry to sound like a complete idiot, but what road??? I keep looking at the original and the edited version and, geez, are my eyes that bad?? |
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04/09/2005 06:04:06 PM · #12 |
| I fixed it, the road was in the bottom righthand fo the photo. |
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04/09/2005 06:12:59 PM · #13 |
I would have liked it a little bit closer, it's a little confusing with all those buildings; I am not certain which is the barn...maybe a different angle?
Message edited by author 2005-04-09 18:14:39. |
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04/09/2005 10:06:59 PM · #14 |
I wouldn't zoom in, but there are a few "natural" problems. The grey shed seperate from the others kinda shuts it down. Finally, DON'T change it to black and white. The green and blue are cool!
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