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04/06/2005 09:49:33 PM · #1 |
Here is an attempt to solicit feedback (several bumps will ensue) of a picture I took, an impromtu portrait of my friend Eric.
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04/06/2005 09:55:19 PM · #2 |
My initial thought is a tighter crop, there is more background than subject. Possibly even go portrait instead of landscape. Nice sharp picture, color on the upper eyelids seem unnaturally red on my (calibrated) monitor.
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04/06/2005 10:19:27 PM · #3 |
You could dodge his eyes a bit to bring them out more - and I'd change the crop to put him further towards the right - and have him look across the frame.
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04/06/2005 10:21:14 PM · #4 |
why does he have that expression on his face?
just wondering. He looks stressed...
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04/06/2005 10:26:46 PM · #5 |
| Great expression. I would try to get a little more color contrast between the face and the rocks. |
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04/07/2005 09:42:03 PM · #6 |
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04/07/2005 11:18:09 PM · #7 |
Given the Librodo treatment.
(Manny's on holidays in the Philippines with no net access)
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04/07/2005 11:33:58 PM · #8 |
| Yea the composition on the original was a wee lack luster. P's crop adds some zing and personality. |
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