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			|  | 04/05/2005 02:24:34 AM · #1 | 
		| | Ok, this is a photo from my first paid portrait session.  Please critique it for me, if you will.  Also, is it possible to correct a shadow on half the face? He didn't cooperate very well with face positions to get rid of the shadow, so I told him I would try to correct it a little if I could.  Thanks! 
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			|  | 04/05/2005 02:45:21 AM · #2 | 
		| | Several ways to do it - You can use a feathered mask on the right side of his face and adjust curves, levels, B/C, use dodge. ORIGINAL (cropped for emphasis on face)
 
   Face partially feather masked & curve adjusted
 
   Freehanded touch up with the Dodge tool
 
   
 Just be careful not to overdo it and end up with this:
 
   
 LOL
 
 Seriously, though - I think it needs a tighter crop. Not real fond of the composition, but good shot overall - something you should be able to work with to produce a decent product. Hope this helps.
 
 Message edited by author 2005-04-05 04:57:52.
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			|  | 04/05/2005 11:19:38 AM · #3 | 
		| | Thanks!  I will try that.  Anyone else have any comments? | 
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