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 04/02/2005 04:36:04 AM · #1
If you get a minute please take a look at the photos I finally made a website for. Any input on anything is great, I am just getting into photography and want to learn as much as I can.

Thanks,
Jordan

Website: //home.comcast.net/~j_media/index.htm
 04/02/2005 05:25:54 AM · #2
Some of the ducks lack detail one their head. Some dodging on the eyes would improve them.
St. Paul looks good. Crop off some of the bottom of the second one, and do something to get rid of the elements next to the statue silhouette.
I don't like te train station that much, except for the water dispenser against the sky.
Nice site, looks a bit flat though. Add some design.
 04/02/2005 03:11:09 PM · #3
Excellent, thanks for taking the time to comment. As far as the site goes, it's just a way to get my pictures online, i'm not looking to gain business or anything.
 04/02/2005 03:19:35 PM · #4
The site seems okay as a vehicle for showing your photos, not over ambitious...functional.

The ducks photos seem over worked in PS or similar...but very well composed/cropped and to my eye, acceptable.

St Paul and the station show the potential of the camera, like all Fujifilms, it is good at capturing just this type of shot, they are crisp, colourful and interesting.

I still use my Fuji 6900Z and the macro function is great, your roses seem slightly off...this is not a criticism...perhaps just post processing.

I like your work, you have a good eye for a compostion and I look forward to viewing more of your work in the future. Keep at it!

Steve

Message edited by author 2005-04-02 15:20:09.
 04/04/2005 11:18:43 AM · #5
Thanks a lot Steve for your comments, they are helpful and something to keep my mind on when out shooting. Like I said in my first message, i'm just getting into photography and am trying to learn as much as I can about composition and what makes a good picture. Nothing better then trial and error!

Thanks again,
Jordan
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