Composite photo critique please - DPChallenge Forums

Canon EF 100-400mm f/4.5-5.6L IS

03/30/2005 11:45:06 PM · #1

Tried something new today:

This is a rough cut in both what I shot and how I shot it, as well as the technique used to create the composite.

Any thoughts, tips, critiques?

awpollard

Canon EOS-5D Mark II

03/30/2005 11:59:22 PM · #2

I'm not expert at this concept but would like to try it some day.

But the layout seems awkward to me...left pieces being horizontal and the right being tilted throws my balance off... On these type composition I personally like to see more of a random placement of the individual pieces...this seems calculated and top heavy. Just my thoughts...

03/31/2005 12:07:00 AM · #3

Originally posted by awpollard:

Thanks for the comment. Yeah, I don't love the placement that much, I'd intended a more random scattering, but I was shooting raw, and my cam's buffer kept filling and making me wait to shoot - I ended up forgetting what I'd shot of the scene, and, I didn't have time to check or re-shoot because I was walking with a friend. Any thoughts on the processing?

03/31/2005 08:42:23 AM · #4

morning bump for tips any might have

04/03/2005 11:54:12 AM · #5

test new sig