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02/22/2005 07:50:16 PM · #1 |
Can i get some input on this composition. Is there anything you would do differently?
Thanks in advance
Lisa
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02/22/2005 08:02:21 PM · #2 |
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02/22/2005 08:09:28 PM · #3 |
the composition is good.
the lighting is bad. too bright.
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02/22/2005 08:09:55 PM · #4 |
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02/22/2005 08:10:59 PM · #5 |
It's pretty nice. Leave a little more breathing room above the hand. Nothing wrong with the lighting, just richen it up a little bit in 'shop, it looks slightly washed out right now.
Robt.
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02/22/2005 08:11:16 PM · #6 |
| I am only a novice, but I think you could tone the lighting down in photoshop and it would look really good..mess around with the saturation or contrast...try different things until you get what you want..try b$w too. |
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02/22/2005 08:17:46 PM · #7 |
Originally posted by bear_music:
It's pretty nice. Leave a little more breathing room above the hand. Nothing wrong with the lighting, just richen it up a little bit in 'shop, it looks slightly washed out right now.
Robt. |
i know what you mean, but you should try and catch this little guy. He is very hyperactive. I am surprised he is even in the photo he moves that fast!LOL |
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02/22/2005 08:19:49 PM · #8 |
| I like the composition and the angle you have used to look up at your subject. I find the metal bars on the left a little distracting. I can picture this with more space on the left say sky, and hanging onto one bar perhaps. If you have the time of course , experiment with different positions until you get one you like. Your focus is the child and I think keeping things simple works best ! Thanks for sharing ;-) |
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02/22/2005 08:24:56 PM · #9 |
Originally posted by megryan:
I like the composition and the angle you have used to look up at your subject. I find the metal bars on the left a little distracting. I can picture this with more space on the left say sky, and hanging onto one bar perhaps. If you have the time of course , experiment with different positions until you get one you like. Your focus is the child and I think keeping things simple works best ! Thanks for sharing ;-) |
thanks Lisa
(where in Sydney are you?) |
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02/22/2005 08:26:51 PM · #10 |
Composition is very good as the play structure works as frame for the face.
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02/22/2005 08:27:25 PM · #11 |
| I'm in Wollongong Lisa. I figured if I put Sydney in my profile the rest of the world will know where that is obviously . Yourself ? |
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02/22/2005 08:28:28 PM · #12 |
| central coast nsw How's the weather? |
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02/22/2005 08:30:30 PM · #13 |
Originally posted by lentil:
central coast nsw How's the weather? |
grey clouds, sun out and soooo steamy. has to rain surely, but we need it don't we ! |
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02/22/2005 08:32:48 PM · #14 |
| it is hot here and sunny. i am over the heat. Watching Dr Phil. :o) |
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