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02/02/2005 01:12:55 PM · #1 |
Any comments are helpful... The black bar at the bottom is a space for a ad (my photography company).
Thanks!
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02/02/2005 01:14:46 PM · #2 |
| Very nice! Nice eyes too. :) |
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02/02/2005 01:15:17 PM · #3 |
Yah, good job! I really dig it! |
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02/02/2005 01:18:14 PM · #4 |
| Nice portrait, but from a marketing perspective, turning your back to the customer may not be the best idea. |
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02/02/2005 01:25:56 PM · #5 |
Very nice! Great light and composition.
:-)
If it's going on your card I'd do something about the shirt...the overall shot has such a setup studio feel (in a very good way) that the shirt throws me off.
Edit: not to be a perv, but maybe no shirt?
Message edited by author 2005-02-02 13:26:15. |
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02/02/2005 01:37:29 PM · #6 |
Love the shot but the shirt kindof makes my eyes blur... and I keep looking at the shirt and not you...
HTH, Mel |
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02/02/2005 01:45:47 PM · #7 |
Here are my thoughts, however you should listen to more experienced portrait photographers. I would like their opinions on my comments.
First let me say that I do like the photo. Your face needs to turn to the camera just a little to keep your nose from breaking the line of the far cheek. Its not really breaking it now but its right on it.
You could use a catchlight in the far eye to even them out a bit.
The closest part of your shirt isn't sharp. I think the shirt adds texture to the photo.
I am trying to be helpful and learn as well.
Tim
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