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01/11/2005 02:09:08 PM · #1 |
Some shots from a job i did a couple of days ago. any comments or critiques?
    
Thanks in advance,
E
P.S. - shot in color, but converted to BW for publication in an art magazine (she's a painter, hence the dirty pants, only 2 will be published, plus some work of her's)
Message edited by author 2005-01-11 14:17:08.
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01/11/2005 05:18:59 PM · #2 |
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01/11/2005 05:21:51 PM · #3 |
The first one is nice and the best IMHO. The second one seems a bit too far away for my taste. The last 3 are nice but they would be a lot nicer if you had some large diffusion to filter out the hotspots on the hair and body (EDIT) or use photoshop to darken those areas.
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01/11/2005 05:23:10 PM · #4 |
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01/11/2005 05:31:15 PM · #5 |
Originally posted by photomayhem:
The first one is nice and the best IMHO. The second one seems a bit too far away for my taste. The last 3 are nice but they would be a lot nicer if you had some large diffusion to filter out the hotspots on the hair and body (EDIT) or use photoshop to darken those areas. |
I was going for the backlight feel, do you think it doesn't work? the first is def my favorite, and it fits the format for the cover (masthead on top)
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01/11/2005 05:41:07 PM · #6 |
Originally posted by ericlimon:
I was going for the backlight feel, do you think it doesn't work? the first is def my favorite, and it fits the format for the cover (masthead on top) |
Well, maybe it's just me but I think the hair is too bright from the sun... Get someone elses oppinion in to make sure it's not just me saying this. |
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01/11/2005 05:49:44 PM · #7 |
I'm no expert but since you asked Eric...
No's 1 and 5 I find most appealing
No. 2...the pose is too stiff
No 3....The "top half" crop is not suited to landscape format
No 4....The background pulls my eye away from the model.
I think that the background is an issue on all except No. 1. The line through the neck on No. 5 rather catches the eye.
As I said... I'm no expert so I hope that a subjective crit helps here.
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01/11/2005 06:47:08 PM · #8 |
my preference 1, 5 , 3
#2 the background is too close to the subject and seems distracting and yes the subject is too distant
#4 Again the background interferes with subject
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