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 12/28/2004 01:38:58 AM · #1
Thoughts anyone? I am toooooo partial.

12/28/2004 01:54:48 AM · #2
Cute shot. You could have probably improved the composition from some angle and aperture.
 12/28/2004 01:55:51 AM · #3
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Andy
 12/28/2004 02:05:31 AM · #4
Very cute shot.. there is a bit of a green/blue tint. I messed with it on my comp and I think if you fix it the color of her skin is much nicer. Beautiful eyes.
 12/28/2004 02:05:38 AM · #5
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 12/28/2004 10:10:55 AM · #6
Thanks for the comments so far. This looks quite a bit different than it did on my home monitor. I will take another stab at the editing when I get home.
 12/28/2004 10:17:48 AM · #7
Nice portrait, clear and well framed. I agree that there's a blue cast overall. I ran an orange Photo Filter on it @ 40%, then History Brush on the eyes and coat. Seems better to me.

12/30/2004 02:07:42 AM · #8
Ok, here is my complete re-edit:



I think I tried too hard on the first one.
Thoughts on this one?
 12/30/2004 02:24:35 AM · #9
getting better. typically in portraits, the eyes should be the point of sharpest focus.. if you could nail that here, it would really make this one pop. i found the shadow very distracting (on the right side of her.. or on her left, i suppose) in the first one. the redone version makes a better distinction between the hair and shadow. maybe you can dodge that area a bit (shrug).

i think i also prefer the crop of the second one, for whatever reason.

Message edited by author 2004-12-30 02:25:23.
 12/30/2004 09:01:57 AM · #10
MUCH better!
 12/30/2004 09:23:12 AM · #11
Thanks for the feedback.
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