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12/15/2004 10:04:30 PM · #1 |
I would just appreciate any comments as to how I may improve the feel? I am putting this in the high school yearbook, and need it in by Friday!
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12/15/2004 10:22:55 PM · #2 |
I like the overall feel but two nits bother me. I'd put the top center image behind the two side images. They are more "standard" compositions and seem more highly impacted by the overlap from the less "traditional" shot of the eyes. Since IMO that center photo is a more artsy type shot that will appeal to less parents (even though I like it I just don't think you'd be as likely to sell shots like that as the photo to either side of it), then I'd suggest allowing the frame of the two photos on either side to overlap it slightly (or at least on the image on the left since the left edge of the center photo gets pretty close to the subject's head/hairline in the lefthand portrait).
2nd nit is the "call" at the bottom of the ad. If they don't know what to do when they see the phone number then I don't think the text is going to be compelling enough to force them to choose you over any other photographer. I think your images speak volumes; leave off the extra characters.
Congrats on this ad and the business, btw. These look great and I like the solid impact that I felt when I viewed the work as a whole.
Kev
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12/15/2004 10:28:39 PM · #3 |
I really do appreciate the view Kev. Those were the little things that I was hoping to hear about. I agree.
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12/15/2004 11:31:33 PM · #4 |
| Left a comment. Now reading Kevin's comments, I'll note that I agree. I thought about the top center "layering" as well when looking at it. And surprisingly, also the word "call". Same thoughts must be validation. |
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