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11/18/2004 10:22:28 PM · #1
Comments would be appreciated. Tell the truth, I can take it.

Message edited by author 2004-11-18 22:22:46.
11/18/2004 10:31:25 PM · #2
Colorful, kind of looks like it could be used as a postcard. I think a window would have been a better backdrop instead of what I think is an air-conditioner. If that had been like 4 panes ( sp?) of glass..cool! Nice shot though.
11/18/2004 10:34:48 PM · #3
overprocessed....

Compositionally...looks solid...
11/18/2004 10:56:54 PM · #4
Thanks for the comments. I will try to work on the weaker points.
11/18/2004 11:02:40 PM · #5
What about moving the bike back a couple feet so the front wheel only went about halfway across the white area. then cropping out the left bricks completely so you have a more offcenter composition. Just some thoughts to spice it up a bit.
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