Ponderous
by dagills22191

Comment:
Awesome pose and beatiful shot of a lovely young lady! I like how you have the lighting here. You have great sense of depth, while maintaining the lovely pale creamy white skin without blowing it out. Great catch light in the eyes. Only real distraction is the butterflies on her shirt. A different outfit (or a little cloning) and this would be the bomb!
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Me and Myself
by artvet

Comment:
This shot is simply precious! I love how you managed to get two different poses (profile and full on) into the same portrait shot! I'm not sure I like the yellowish cast though. And while your lighting is spot on for depth, a touch of catch light in her eye would take this shot one step beyond!
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I can hear music
by RUEDISCHMUTZ

Comment:
Lovely young lady in a very cute pose! Great use of catch light to get the twinkle in her eye. Nice use of creative lighting to giver her face depth. Two things that would take this from a good shot to a great shot, there's a little bit of clutter in the background. A simple cloth hung behind or a slightly different angle takes care of that. Also, the left side of the shot is a tad too dark at the top. I would try a simple reflector (spelled white poster board) to bounce back just a touch of light onto the headphones!
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Sheridan
by gajmaj

Comment:
Lovely young lady in a great pose! I really like how she's looking off frame too. Hey, your lighting is a touch harsh though making the shot look kinda flat. You got awesome light on her hair. A little catch light in her eyes would make them twinkle nicely! I think this is done with a reflector or a smaller light to the front.
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My Love...
by toddhead

Comment:
Very beautiful young lady! (Have I seen her here before?) Nice shot. I'm not sure I like the yellowish cast to it. It also seems a little flat. You lose her nose almost. If more of the lighting was to the side it would help. The black glove also gets lost but against the background. I REALLY love the hair lighting and the catch light in her eyes. I need to find out how to do those two things for myself!
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Innocence
by mariomel

Comment:
You either spent a lot of time setting up the lighting, or have a nice studio cause it's spot on. You got it all, hair light, catch lights in the eyes, beautiful highlites and shadows. Kudos
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Safari Sam
by Jacko

Comment:
One of the better kid pics. You have great lighting here giving a sense of depth. Pulls out the wonderful grin on his face also. I like the high key effect. Wanna know how ya didi it.
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Veronique
by sahko

Comment:
Though your lighting may be a little harsh for my taste, your use of leading liines, simple set and almost monotone color scheme make this a pleasure to look at! Love the use of perspective.
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KIDS!
by Chefboz

Comment:
Looks like a fun bunch of kids! Wish they weren't so harshly lit though. It kind of makes them look flat. If ya move the lights to the side it will help a lot! It also looks like you tried to blur out all but their faces. It looks a little contrived and is distracting. With a little better lighting, and a little less editing this would be the bomb!
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got twins?
by soniecat

Comment:
Beautiful boys! Too bad they look so flat. It doesn't do them justice... Try moving your lights around to the sides. Also, it looks like ya might have used a flash here, try it without. You'll definately need a tripod and a little luck cause kids are a little squrimy, but it should pay off!
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