Airbird
by bigbuda

Comment:
Not really sure how this is fitting in with this challenge. I see these all the time.
The front wing is very overexposed, the deatil sis lost in it, as is the rear of the back wing. I don't like the rear wing being cropped out.

PHOTOGRAPHY BEFORE COMPUTERS
by hjl

Comment:
Now, I like the idea, I like the Red Light, the books, the Film. Maybe they could have been arranged in a more interesting way though, some more film spread around or something just to give this a little extra kick. This is especially the case as you can't use colour to give it this.....

Former Child Star - Ricky Schroeder
by love

Comment:
Is it????
For this type of photo, which is an opportunist shot, and not something set up, you have done well. The light is pretty good (a few minor issues) but its not like you are in a studio. Same with the person in the bg as well.
Good opportunist shot

"Everyone set? Good, no stopping until we get to grandma's"
by vawendy

Comment:
And you are going to have tears
Great idea for this one. Like what you have tried to achieve.
However, as the car is a major element in this photo, I think it is too far in the corner. it needed to be, both horizontally and vertically, closer to the centre (actually, closer to the thirds line really) This then would have made it the second focal point for the photo, rather than being right in the corner........

polaroid nostalgia coming soon
by LMO366

Comment:
I like the idea and composition of the shot, and the black and white processing, but it is too out of focus for me

Childhood Dreams
by jasonlprice

Comment:
The light from the window is quite harsh, causing shaddows on the far side of her face and hands. The crop is very restrictive and the pose appears awkward, like maybe she isn't holding the camera correctly.

Remember those long walks down the back to the dunny?
by ButterflyGirl

Comment:
Thankfully No

The crop of this is too close on the right hand side. I don't know why you have the bad discolouration in the upper corner of this. The sky is blown out for much of the scene, as you shot intot he sun, so needed to overexponse the sky to get the toilet lit

Fresh milk
by Brin

Comment:
Never did get milk like this. Comes from being a little too young, and always getting the overprocessed crap from the supermarket. The white is good, I like the angle. For me, a little lighter on the can to make it stand out a touch more from the black background would help, as I feel it is a touch dark overall. However, with all the different monitors, others might say you are too light.......

X 56
by ace flyman

Comment:
Well and truly forgotten this one. The moss, the vines all add to this shot. A great subject for this challenge. I think your crop is a little too close. A little extra room on all sides could have improved this, as it appears very contrained within the border. Not sure the border is giving you much except adding to the contrained feel

• Caboose •
by PenelopeK

Comment:
Not in my time, except on the historic railway

Love the Red in this, it makes the subject jump out from the rest of the image. A shame about the puddle though. There is not enough of a reflection for it to add to the image. The vertical crop I think could have been changed to help. Some more sky, and less forground a bit could have helped. Horizontally you are on the rule of thirds, doing it vertically may have also helped.