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by ButterflyGirl

Comment:
Looks like you had a good subject for the challenge. It doesnt look like you really took the time to compose the shot though. I dont like that you cant see the guys face. It takes away from what the image could say to the viewer IMO.
It's overexposed, but that can be adjusted with some PP work.
You should have gone up to talk to the guy, talked to him a bit and then taken some great shots.

When I was just a little girl, I asked my mother what will I be?
by Oded

Comment:
Dont really care for the fisheye. It looks like you had a good subject but you didnt really get in there like you could have. I think you could have caught some really amazing photos of the lady if you had taken the time to really compose your shots. Either way though, I think the fisheye was a poor choice.
You would still make this photo decent with some levels/curves/contrast adjustments.

Luv Of Coffee
by Crafty

Comment:
"Luv of Coffee" lol
Funny title. It's empty. So I have to wonder how great the coffee really is. lol

For many people, but not for everyone...
by Windtale

Comment:
This is a winner. My favorite in the challenge. My only 10.
You captured a great moment. You captured so much in this shot. It really speaks to the viewer like a photograph is intended too. Great eye! You did a really good job with the PP. You were borderline of doing too much but I think it came out brilliant. I love it. There is something wrong if this doesnt place in the top 3. Although I think it should be 1st. I cant even tell you how much I love the composition. Brilliant, just brilliant.

The Big Picture.
by twotkyns

Comment:
You took a good photograph and ruined it with all the process work. Bad vignetting as well.
You should have stayed more natural with this. You had a great subject for the challenge and basically turned it into the way over used HDR process.

Bad luck
by Zigomar

Comment:
Looks like you had a great capture. The green tint was a bad choice. Very bad in my opinion. I think that it actually ruined the photo. You had an awesome subject. I like the crop but why why why the green tint????
You should have either stuck with color or gone B&W. Also needs contrast/levels/curves adjustment.
If it wasnt for everything I mentioned, I think this would have been a winner.

White Dog + Punks On Dope
by pawdrix

Comment:
You really caught a great shot here. I dont really care for the white border. Something darker would have brought the subjects together better and a nice vignette would have made them pop.
You really need a levels/curves adjustment as well.
I just love the photo though. It's just not quite there as far as being "finished" IMO
Best of luck to you. Despite everything I mentioned, its one of my favs in the challenge.

October 2008
by e301

Comment:
I would love to see this one in color. I think the B&W might have been a mistake. The painting on the wall looks to be colorful. It would have been a nice contrast. I hope you post the color version after the challenge.
Best of luck, its a great capture.

Rainy Day
by tfarrell23

Comment:
nice capture. A bit too soft for my liking. I think you brought down the Clarity level way too much for the overall shot.

Alone
by dougi555

Comment:
great capture. great color and I like the vignetting, it really helps to bring focus in on the subject.
lighting is really nice as well. 9