Girls just wanna have fun!
by BarbB

Comment:
Here is something that might be useful. C.L.O.S.A.T
Character - the girl
Location - studio - but does not fit the intent of title
Object- the scooter
Scenario - the broken arm
Action - on the scooter
Theme - ?

You have everything to tell a story but the Theme and Location to make it stronger. This is just me... However, you did a great job capturing her though. She feels very comfortable with the photographer.

girl.jpg
by QueenC

Comment:
I think you used the beauty light. Very sweet shot. The skin is perfect and does not seem artificial at all.

moon-and-star.jpg
by QueenC

Comment:
Absolutely love the face expression! I notice the white part of the eyes shows more on your sister, but maybe that was intentional. Regardless...great work!

tattoo.jpg
by QueenC

Comment:
Your taste with photoshoping might be different...but I would probably clone some hair on her finger projecting out on top of her hair. The lighting is very pretty. I'm happy to see the tattoo is the main focus and not her face. I recall a few images in which her face and tatto were competing for the frame.

chelseas.jpg
by QueenC

Comment:
You captured her really well here...I would use spot healer and remove the sun spot on her shoulder and the very dim spots on her cheek. There is a little bit of her strap showing.

A Young King
by trevytrev

Comment:
One of my favorites in this contest.

Self-Destruct
by QueenC

Comment:
This is my last comment on you old work. This photo and "Evolution of a Girl" are my favorities.
Can't wait to see your future work.

bribiba.jpg
by QueenC

Comment:
Gypsy! It has some feeling. Memsmerizing look.

Evolution of a Girl
by QueenC

Comment:
You know it! Great!

Tulips of Paradise
by benee

Comment:
Very good shot.