Give way
by Rino63

Comment:
color is exquisite(sp). work on composition a little more... try working in "thirds"...

Safe!
by JBHale

Comment:
i love the clarity. the color is nice. contrast looks good to me. i would've taken out the red cooler; that's a little distracting. not bad though!

Sluggin'
by kate12303

Comment:
don't use a flash when you're using a macro lens. at least not of a shiny/slimy thing... make sure the focal plan is on the most important part of the subject... in this case, was is the lower back of the slug? try getting on your belly and shooting right next to the slug to get a more "intimate" view of it. we all see slugs by looking down at them. try finding a new, more interesting angle that might give your picture a little more "ooomff!"

Skyple
by eliseqld

Comment:
movement, yes. but a picture of a cool car going fast has been done about 12891273897398 times before.... basically what i'm trying to say is if you're going to do a picture of a cool car... photograph it in a cool way to make your picture unique from the tons of car pics floatin out there...

Touchdown Bound
by rendarena

Comment:
there is alot of movement, yes... but there isn't really any attention to detail or composition. doesn't "wow" me...

fountain of T E A R S
by lealove

Comment:
i appreciate what you are doing with this subject. however, i would suggest that if you are trying to capture the movement of the water droplets, [in my opinion] you need to make sure they are in focus... the only thing that i mainly criticize with this piece is the fact that there really isn't anything to focus on. i mean, the water droplets are interesting, but i'm not sure if the texture of the stone is more interesting... i don't know... maybe make a more deliberate approach to what you're trying to show in this type of photo.

Designed for the county roads
by kevip6

Comment:
the movment is nice. i like how the photo doesn't show any evidence of anyone taking the picture (no reflection in the mirror, no legs in the seat) very interesting...

Faster then flash
by jrothlisberger

Comment:
the title doesn't explain the photo. there isn't any motion. why was this submitted?

Racing Traffic
by hammersam

Comment:
i enjoy the movement in this piece. composition is nice. i feel like you captured the essence of the assignment.

Trainspotting
by kelweis

Comment:
the balance is too heavy to the bottom left in this piece. the contrast could be better.