Fading
by ReM_Fr

Comment:
Lovely simple lines; nice color.

archetype
by Gordon

Comment:
Sorry but this looks like you didn't even try to focus.

Walkway to History
by MAK

Comment:
Nice composition, and I really like the detail on the facade.

Gotham City
by Saad

Comment:
Everything in the foreground seems a bit greenish.

120 Years Young
by Bud

Comment:
This may be tilted a bit too far - I feel like the windows are horizontal. But I really like the exposure - nothing blown out, and nothing too dark.

Club Silvestre
by BAMartin

Comment:
AHAHA! I know exactly where this is! I have been to the Phoenix Zoo many times, I love taking my camera there.

Posted
by Donna21

Comment:
Thanks for the comments. I'm still not sure what I did wrong, lol.

As for the pulling back and/or negative space - there wasn't really much "space." It was pretty cluttered. I originally thought of using one of these -



I did have one from a different angle where there's a large patch of grass in the foreground, but it doesn't really have as much impact as it does w/ the sign.

(This and the following images are straight from the camera - no processing, just resized by photobucket)

Here's the whole shed w/ the background -

and the original shot I used -

Thanks again

Under Blackfriars Bridge
by TillyTiger

Comment:
If those 2 people on the beach are supposed to be the subject, they need to be emphasized more somehow. If they're not the subject, what is? Too bad, because I love the lines of the bridge - just not sure what's being framed by it.

Frame of a Winter Day
by jsc9306

Comment:
I don't see the framing. Is the middle face supposed to be framed by the others?

"ALL IN"
by negative

Comment:
The yellowish tone ruins it for me.