Meat soup with vegetables
by Mona

Comment:
I see there's a bit of a Warhol influence here, I like the idea of that but perhaps could've used a brighter, crazier packaging to make this pop more.

The photograph of the soup is not very pleasing imo

I saw red when I was shopping on Monday
by primabarbara

Comment:
Meets the challenge but lacks finesse for me. You started making an effort with the red cloth, then seemed to stop there.
I reckon this would've been more effective in an entire red background!

vitamins
by Tiberius

Comment:
Lacking drama or narrative for me. To improve, maybe re-think how your composition could add a point of interest? Do you think the background highlights are helping?

Soup Stuff
by DCrest01

Comment:
Meets the challenge, bit bonkers with the choice of subject (which I like!) didn't need the "Herb Ox" box in my opinion, unless you could clearly see the packaging. Interesting textures

Fresh Produce
by Judi

Comment:
Meets the challenge, I think the background gives a good sense of market.

I like your range of subjects but perhaps try be more selective with them. Could you have peeled that bit of onion skin that's coming off? Could the chives not be broken at the ends? Does the peanuts, between the chives add anything or makes it look messy?


I would've given a 8 if it had those details looked into

Citrus Morning
by giantmike

Comment:
You seem to have really though about the set up, but the composition and crop chosen is too tight. When I think of still life, I picture the entire subjects showing, it lacks negative space around it in my opinion

ignoble ones
by tvsometime

Comment:
Meets the challenge (I suppose) but lacks interest, maybe it needed some dramatic lighting to give a bit of oomph

A Few Essentials
by jomari

Comment:
Though very supermarket, it lacks real narrative... too much going on. More is less!

"... and long I thee in Apple Comfort waited."
by Bear_Music

Comment:
Very supermarket, very still life, love the colours and composition BUT dislike the harsh contrast on your image. Especially on the bottom left and left areas. Or is that just the colour of the apples? It brought it down for me

A cold still life
by Sisto

Comment:
Interesting mood