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| 06/25/2007 02:19:23 PM |
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| 06/25/2007 02:18:13 PM |
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| 06/25/2007 02:16:51 PM |
Seaside Archby orvaratliComment: Woah - I thought it was a pool of water, but it's an arch? cool... Great shot; if the horizon appeared in the arch it would be more obvious. |
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| 06/25/2007 01:28:11 PM |
Colorby okiesisiComment: Greetings from the critique club! Great shoe. I wish they'd had these during my converse days - my favorite pair had each panel a different color, though, which was cool.
Pros:
The colors are working for you, and you've captured them well. I like the general idea of the composition (abstracting the shoe by cropping part of it) but I do agree with those who suggest you change the angle a bit and definately keep the top of the shoe - it feels crowded.
Cons:
The biggest is your lighting; it's quite harsh and flat. If you could diffuse it somehow and/or add additional lights from the sides I think you'd have a much stronger shot; as it is the shadows on the background are quite distracting and the shoe lacks depth.
The Challenge:
You were concerned about meeting the challenge, but some of these are so open ended that I think people are pretty interested in different interpretations; from my perspective anyway you met the challenge just fine.
Overall I'd try to soften your lighting try taking your shots from a bunch of different angles, to see if you can find something that pops a little more. |
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| 06/25/2007 01:14:45 PM |
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| 06/25/2007 01:11:31 PM |
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| 06/25/2007 01:10:29 PM |
Storm Flight by hotpastaComment: A little more D&B than suits my tastes, but I recognize it as a style, and it's well executed. Perfect approach to the challenge. Very nice shot. |
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| 06/25/2007 01:09:13 PM |
Master Of Disguiseby JawnyRicoComment: building looks perfect; plants to the left are blown out though, and that detracts. nice composition. Your poison ivy looks very healthy. |
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| 06/25/2007 01:07:52 PM |
Out In The Fieldby Mr_PantsComment: Awesome! I take it this is an homage to jj's classic wheat shot.
The little spots of red are a little distracting, particularly along the right edge. |
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| 06/25/2007 01:05:22 PM |
untitledby aznymComment: Classic architectural abstract. beautifully executed. Looks like it's straight out of a 1970's photo mag... I love it. |
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