Exposed To the Cold Worldby
sagestudioComment: Even in Black and White, I can tell this is a Sidwell girl. There are lots of things I really like about this shot. I'll start with those:
First, the details of the setup.
1. Her hair is not perfectly "coiffed." That sets the feeling of the "world" being unfriendly at times.
2. The hole in her jeans. As above.
3. Barefoot. As above.
4. Slight frown. As above.
Next, the composition
1. I like the centered subject. Works perfectly here.
Details of the shot:
1. I think that having her shirt washed out like that really blends it in with the border.
2. Also, the varying textures on the sidewalk around her really frames her nicely.
I think that one thing to try would have been having the entire square she's sitting in be in the shot, but her still in the center of the frame. I'm not sure that would have been better, because I can't picture it in my head too well, but it could be something to try, anyway.
Also, perhaps just slightly thinner on the border?
Overall, I really love this shot. 10 from me.