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| 07/23/2003 12:26:54 AM |
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| 07/23/2003 12:24:18 AM |
Jade Orbby zerocusaComment: Congratulations! Very nice shot. I like the white background - kind of makes it look like the balls are floating. Great job on the composition too. |
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| 07/19/2003 09:03:35 PM |
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| 07/19/2003 08:46:17 PM |
'Round and 'Roundby RiderGalComment: Good subject for the challenge - round within round, within round. Focus is good, B&W works ok. Two things I don't like: The crop is too tight - I get that you were trying to focus in on the main circle, but you got so tight that the surrounding elements - the edge of the bigger arch, the two little arches below - sort of infringe on the shot. Opening out a little would have, IMO, allowed them to be more in context and improved the overall feel. Also (and I realize that you might not have had much choice), but the shadow really detracts. If you could have shot it at a different time, it might have helped that. But a good shot overall. |
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| 07/19/2003 08:41:36 PM |
At the old marshmallow factory...by tyrkinnComment: A good idea (and great title), but the composition could have been improved greatly by closing in on one or two of the bales, hopefully getting the tractor and maybe the phone poles, if not out of the picture, then at least out of the middle area. Color is good, especially for it being overcast, focus and sharpness are good. Just wish some of the "marshmallows" took over the shot a little. |
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| 07/19/2003 08:38:39 PM |
Edggyby FayechComment: The tones are weird (for me) on this. I\'m sure it\'s what you wanted, it\'s just not working for me. I also think the yolk should definitely have been more in the focal range, and the edge of the paper towel being blurred keeps bugging me too. But it\'s definitely a good and (so far) unique idea. The composition is great except for whatever\'s going on in the upper right hand corner. Just a couple elements short of being a great picture. |
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| 07/19/2003 08:33:51 PM |
Classic Carby PaulMdxComment: Nice. No reflection of the photographer, that I can find - excellent! All the technical issues look good, especially the DOF. Great job. |
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| 07/19/2003 08:31:39 PM |
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| 07/19/2003 08:27:31 PM |
In the distanceby RydanComment: A little too distant, I think, and not very clear at that. I think you could have improved the result a little by cropping closer in to the wheel, and getting whatever that is in the lower right out of the picture. Aside from removing that distraction, it would have made the wheel (the roundness) more prominant. |
| 07/19/2003 08:25:06 PM |
Water Worksby greenem2Comment: I think more motion or less - this is just at an in between level where it just looks blurry. But the rest of the shot is definitely very sharp and crisp. I also think that just a little wider shot would have been a little better - it feels a little cramped as it is. But a very nice shot overall. |
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