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| 04/23/2009 09:45:49 AM |
Pulling in to the Stationby WriteHeartComment: Nicely different composition and scene. I like how you kept the one spike anchoring the frame in the lower left, and just enough of the station to give us context to follow the line back up the track. The off kilter frame works for me, only nit is I it could use just a tad more sharpness on the foreground rail, perhaps by shooting at f/16 or smaller rather than 5.6. |
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| 04/23/2009 09:41:42 AM |
End of the Lineby dsternerComment: I liked how you composed this, the wide expanse of the land and the lonely engine off to the side, seeming abandoned as the ragged bushes grew up around it in the middle of nowhere, or so it seems. Nicely seen scene that should have done better in the challenge. |
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| 04/23/2009 09:36:13 AM |
"Waiting To Be Humped"by QuigleyComment: I like the tight crop -- its a bit different for this challenge, and worked well, particularly with the shallow DOF you used. My only nit is the headlamp cut down the middle. Shows a nice bit of detail of your train, and colors and sharpness are spot on. |
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| 03/28/2009 09:52:23 AM |
Life with lavaby inuyashakibaloveComment: Another DNMC, but an oobie take that I can overlook (as with the other similar shot in this challenge). Like the focus ona single lamp, but think you need to come in closer and wait for that big blob in the middle to break into several smaller ones, and adjust exposure to avoid blowing the highlights out. Lighting is too harsh; needs something external to soften it. White balance needs to be adjusted to remove the green cast, and next time flip the lamp around sound the ding on the base isn't showing. |
| 03/28/2009 09:52:21 AM |
Lava Lava Every whereby KBFishComment: I get your oobie take ... abstract motion inside the lava lamp. Still DNMC (cuz you didn't use the camera to create the motion), but I'm willing to overlook that. What I can't overlook is the overall green-yellow cast to the image (which could be corrected with a simple white balance adjustment), the dust or spots and soft focus on the leftmost lamp, and the trapped negative space between the three lamps. A tighter focus on a single lamp and some external lighting, or a different setup of the three lamps would have really helped here. |
| 03/28/2009 09:43:28 AM |
The Installerby QuigleyComment: nice motion blur, but no abstractness scores this poorly in this challenge. Beyond that, the lines in the background and the pnuematic hose curving in and out of the bottom edge hurt the composition. Needs a bit more midtone contrast and more detail in the blacks to really pop as a B+W. Nice try. |
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| 03/27/2009 09:58:42 AM |
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| 03/27/2009 09:58:07 AM |
Manfretby GoodEndComment: Like brush strokes across the scene. Nicely done. 7 |
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| 03/27/2009 09:57:39 AM |
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| 03/27/2009 09:57:14 AM |
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