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| 09/27/2006 09:31:42 PM |
Rain Cometh...Hopefullyby dacrazyrnComment: A strong composition, and catches some of that feel of approaching rain after a long dry time. The structure that the post and wire lends to the scene is essential. |
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| 09/27/2006 09:29:06 PM |
First Signes Of Autumnby blacjackComment: A quite pleasing old school image - with some impact, although perhaps the DOF could have been even more extreme for real effect. |
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| 09/27/2006 09:19:02 PM |
Circularby Everyday ReneeComment: Quite a nice approach. maybe more contrast might have brought out the geometry more strongly, though of course it would require care to keep the grey day feel that you have. Reasonable composition, but the top rioght corner disturbs things a touch. |
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| 09/27/2006 09:17:30 PM |
Equalibrium...by prachiComment: Good colour and focus, though the grass seeds maybe intrude a touch too much in front of that particular blade for neatness. You might have found a stronger compositional line if you'd been able to place it more definitely on a diagonal - especially as there isn't another parallel element to help prioritise your primary subject. Though I guess focus and the water drops go a long way to achieving that. |
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| 09/27/2006 09:14:01 PM |
Rain won't stop me now!!by BalkanComment: As with some other shots of this kind, I wonder if you might not have benefitted from greater depth of field; the road and landscape are perhaps too far out of focus for comfort. I like the idea, but the streaks of the wiper blades don't seem to add much. |
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| 09/27/2006 05:33:23 PM |
Rain, Rain, Go Awayby princessfriesenComment: I like the style of this image, in its basic form at least; You could have nad more luck/taken more care dpeneding on the situation with the patterns of raindrops relative to the cat, and you might have usefuly used a greater depth of field - cat is just a touch too out of focus for real impact, to my eye. |
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| 09/27/2006 05:31:01 PM |
Roof-lessby MadukesComment: There is eventually a point at which one just has to get down to 'how does this meet the challenge?'. Kind of a boring comment, but really ... |
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| 09/27/2006 03:30:15 PM |
Scars from yesterday's rainby KnightmovesComment: Has suggestions of a slightly careless approach - the number of weeds visible, that little section of sky, the lack of a sense of conclusion to the linear compositional elements. Keeping a shot whose primary impact is textural in colour like this doesn't work I think - this would be so much more impactful in black and white, and even more so had it been shot at a less harsh time of light. |
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| 09/27/2006 03:23:05 PM |
Sparkle by librodoComment: Kind of fun portrait; nice to see some more black and white getting around the place, but beyond simple portraiture I don't find mich here - and, in a challenge sense, the rain element seems almost like an incidental. It would be mean to mark you down for that though, but I've never really understood what's so interesting about portraiture ... |
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| 09/27/2006 03:20:08 PM |
Kneeling at a Streetlightby ibkcComment: Streetlight? I guess we must take your word for it, though I see nothing at all here to suggest such a thing. The detailing in the hands is nice, but the light on them is terribly flat, almost completely even and leaving a very two-dimensional impression. One gets a certain feeling of the kind of thing you might have been aiming for, but for me it absolutely lacks drama. |
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