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| 11/28/2006 03:03:28 PM |
The "X" Markby gg3rdComment: A pity, to my eye, that your processing has taken this so very far away from the ordinary 'photograph'. Apart from the fact that this isn't a place that repays such looks with any kindness, I would suggest it detracts from the interesting visual phenomenon of that 'X'. |
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| 11/28/2006 03:01:45 PM |
Straight & Upby AlainComment: Quite interesting - though your choice of having the rails run directly up the screen has left the bridge/tower thing seeming tilted to the right. I wonder if you mightn't have been better repaid by trying to trade off the severe regularity of that ironwork with the organic (and visually appealing) snow-dusting on the trees? |
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| 11/28/2006 10:48:04 AM |
The Wonders of Concreteby nparekhComment: Your choice of the shallow depth of field forces the attention to the very bottom of frame, to no real purpose that I can discern: I'd have thought it was the overall graphic of this shot which would interest - in fact, it might have been a pretty interesting shot with a huge depth of field, allowing the eye to travel the full length of those steps in both directions. |
| 11/28/2006 10:42:11 AM |
Romaby unicumComment: Good photography. The Cinquecento is perhaps just a touch too warped by the lens for my liking - there's enough comment in the scene, and in the collection of junk under the wiper blades already, perhaps? - but the location, tonality and the overall groove of this is marvellously effective. |
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| 11/28/2006 10:38:38 AM |
The Stockboy's Perspectiveby posthumousComment: Now here's an interesting shot; to my mind it cries out for black and white - or at the very least a heightening of the contrast to bring out the closing lines of those shelves - and you slight wide-angle works terribly well to suggest the shelves towering over him too. You might have hoped to catch a better moment fom your unsuspecting model? Some sense of weariness perhaps? He seems just a touch ordinary, just working, just a bit disengaged from any emotion or feeling. But these are all nit-picking points - I like this shot a good deal. |
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| 11/28/2006 10:31:27 AM |
On the Bridgeby MichaelsComment: The recession is quite kind on the eye, though overall it's perhaps a touch too unchallenging for me: I wonder if you might not have made it a more austere and strange composition by shooting from the level of the topmost handrail, dividing the frame into quarters with that andit's shadow and the lighting conduit above? |
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| 11/28/2006 10:28:07 AM |
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| 11/28/2006 10:26:53 AM |
5th century BCby yianisnComment: The negative space makes a good point of the fallen column - though that might be a touch too sophisticated for the average rapid voter, perhaps. I might personally have wated a bit more detail - just a touch more of the damn things visible, really - in the standing columns, which, like this, become more of a wall perhaps. |
| 11/28/2006 10:23:38 AM |
In His Eyesby moviemanComment: I enjoy this - the positioning of the image in the frame within frame is effective - just enough of lips, eyes, hair and cheekbone to emphasise the make-up, without making it seem too posed. The background disturbs a little - just a bit too close to being in focus perhaps, and therefore drawing the eye in an attempt to discover wat it is? It might have made a fine black and white image - that would enhance the strange graphic composition, and reduce the absolute impact of the orange and the background. |
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| 11/08/2006 01:35:54 AM |
Echoes of Thunderby ImagineerComment: Good stuff Jon - almost like Gursky in its vagueness, but impeccable composition. Up in the heady heights of the 300's too. |
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