the insomniac
by irishblue

Comment:
Self portrait? Wow, can I relate to the insomnia! *sigh* Got a bit of a "fish bowl" look to it. Perhaps, a bit too close a shot?

Keep Looking
by urbanique

Comment:
Interesting idea....but, where'd she go? *smile*

Pretty woman
by BrianD

Comment:
Pretty woman is right, but I'm not sure about the lightness of this shot???? Perhaps, a little less contrast???

dead wood
by cascananas

Comment:
Portrait??????????

WHAT A WINDY DAY
by paytonsmom

Comment:
CUTE!!!! She looks like a little model! Perhaps, cropping in a bit more might have made it look a little less snapshot like?????

31
by redmoon

Comment:
Nice gaze, but the background kinda takes away focus on the face and the soft focus everywhere but his nose kind of brings attention only to his nose area. Wondering if perhaps, you were a little too close to his face while shooting and perhaps, that's what kind of gives this "fish bowl" look to his face???? (sorry, no offense meant in that term. Just no better way to describe it.) I've done that and it's hard to get a correct distance and still maintain a good shot and clarity. Still working on that myself!

Just one more before you leave for work
by Knightmoves

Comment:
There's just something about the lighting in this one on her face that isn't quite there. Not sure what it is but, it needed something more. Perhaps, having closed in a bit more on her face in the shooting????

Claire
by rapid

Comment:
REally NICE shot, but the details have been washed out. I'm betting that was done to lighten the background up more????

Don't Touch My Ying Yang
by nroscoe

Comment:
Wow, this shot has a lot of depth to it on several fronts. I'm just wondering if perhaps a bit of lightening and contrast adjusting might have brought this out a bit more. The expression is one that's "harsh" looking, so lighting being a bit harsher might have brought that out a bit more????

L'Avaleur de Lame
by labuds

Comment:
Interesting portrait idea.