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| 09/18/2004 11:34:28 PM |
From Bulb To Flowerby guitar_mannComment: What attracts me here are the various sculpted light patterns created by the fan (?). Outside of 'Oh, this is a fan', I'm not sure what to think next. Perhaps a stronger point of view or mood lighting would help clarify your communication? If you are going for the abstract, then the shapes and lighting and colors have to be really special so that we can enjoy them for themselves; I don't think that quite happens here. I hope this helps! Keep shooting! |
| 09/18/2004 11:31:09 PM |
G4by GeneralEComment: Some interesting patterns here. I'm afraid there's not much for me, personally, to grasp on to, so I'm having a hard time understanding it. Your major clues are mostly wires and a few soft focused lights, and it's not adding up to anything in my brain. Some suggestions might be to select a different angle to your communication is more clear. Lighting for a specific mood might also help. Or try getting your focus on one or two things that will really help you communicate what you want. My attention is on the ball of light up center. Then my eye goes to the telephone cord down left becaus it is most in focus. They then move up to the greenish double-lights at right. So this progression isn't giving me enough data to form meaning. I hope this helps. Keep shooting! |
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| 09/18/2004 11:25:52 PM |
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| 09/18/2004 11:25:11 PM |
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| 09/18/2004 11:24:08 PM |
Reflection Of The Pastby artvetComment: Very nice still life. Clarity is wonderful, and the arrangement seems balanced. To me, it evokes a fine mood, so I think your photo works! 8 |
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| 09/17/2004 08:51:53 PM |
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| 09/14/2004 08:51:14 AM |
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| 09/13/2004 08:10:02 AM |
Brightby heidaComment: Hey Heida, where's the burning? Nice shot! |
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| 09/13/2004 07:59:15 AM |
Peachby davidbedardComment: You managed to eek a nice still life out of this challenge. Congrats! 8 |
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| 09/13/2004 07:57:43 AM |
illusion by ursulaComment: Nice clarity and simplicity. A fun idea, well executed. 9 |
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