X Marks the Spot
by jwillie44

Comment:
I don't see how neg space is here much less adding wow to the shot. I'm sorry to be so blunt. As for technicals I think the windows in the back are damaging the potential of this shot. The effect of the window on the scene is okay but maybe if you were able to get above the scene a little more then you could get less of the window in the shot and crop out what is there. Or maybe an angle from the other side of the room so they're not in the shot at all? 4

Beware: An Ounce of Fire!
by ocninon

Comment:
Love the colors.

Vroom?
by Lonz

Comment:
Why the ? I like the negative space here. The noise in the sky tells me its a little overprocessed though.

Sailor's Delight
by jjusa

Comment:
Pink at night sailors delight. My comment for you though as for a few others in this challenge is that your title indicates the sunset as your subject and the challenge is for negative space to add the wow factor to your subject. If your subject were say a small boat in the foreground (without the bushes) then your bg/negative space would be the sunset and then it works but as your title indicates the sunset IS your subject therefore where's the neg space? I still think you have a nice shot here so it gets a 5.

Divided Light
by jackal9

Comment:
Now thats some nice neg space. I love bricks. I think I'd have titled it "window pie"... but that's just me.

Waiting for my pair ....
by the99

Comment:
Pretty wood floor. Hope you find your other shoe. Not sure you'll be able to get them on your feet though cause... *looks around to see if anyone's listening and then whisper*... I think its a dog chew toy.

Hats Off
by jjbeguin

Comment:
This shot is too busy for my taste and I don't really see negative space here.

Negative colors for negative space
by Brin

Comment:
Interesting. I wouldn't have thought to do anything like this. Its way out there but seems to work for the challenge imo.

Eclipse of The Soul
by Ivory

Comment:
This is pretty grainy but I'm going to assume you intended it that way. I actually like the dim lighting but the bg doesn't seem to add a lot to the shot imo.

Searching the bleak skies above for color unseen
by Mark

Comment:
Okay I'll bite... What do radio waves have to do with color? You might have gotten a better shot here if it were late afternoon or early morning but this seems to have been shot midday?