Pouring A Cold One
by JohnFord

Comment:
Good try and I do see "liquid in motion".
I find the crop at the top a little odd, and the whole image is a bit murky and lacklustre.

the impermanence of it all
by 2mccs

Comment:
What is the subject here? I assume that is the photographer's shadow... is that it?

lazy day
by flaherma

Comment:
Hmmm.... I agree, that river is very likely "liquid in motion" and yet that is not what comes to MY mind when looking at that scene (plus I'm not crazy about the processing, sorry).

One night of rainfall
by Kroburg

Comment:
Yes, I see "liquid in motion", but I find the processing on this very busy scene a bit harsh and difficult to look at.

Waves
by Neat

Comment:
Very "impressionist" in style, and it works for me in this case. You have a near diagonal which is way better than just a straight line, I like the colours and I most certainly get a sense of "liquid in motion".

Whirlpool
by MargaretNet

Comment:
I'm not a really big fan of HDR, but you did ok with it.
However, I'm not too crazy about the composition. It is neither dead centre, nor is it at an angle that might create visual interest, leading lines, or adhere to the rule of thirds or other compositional rules.

I certainly DO get the feeling of "liquid in motion", though.

Water
by Mona

Comment:
Yes, I can see "liquid in motion", but this scene is not very exciting. It doesn't help that the waterfall leans down on the right.
If you can, you might like to go back and experiment with different angles.... creating diagonals, leading lines, etc might make for a more interesting composition.

keeping it cool
by kiwinick

Comment:
In principle, this is a good idea for a subject.

However, I don't like the boring centered and straight composition, and the way you used your body to create partial shade.

Celebrating the 4th in style!
by wdamman

Comment:
Your very central composition works due to the very symmetrical scene.

Sorry, but I find the colours/contrast/processing very harsh and hard to look at.

watering
by tvsometime

Comment:
Yes, I can see "liquid in motion", but I see a VERY busy shot in B&W, and I really don't know what the subject is.
My eyes keep trying to settle on a leaf near the top, only to be distracted by bright circles elsewhere.