DPChallenge: A Digital Photography Contest You are not logged in. (log in or register
 
Browse Settings
Currently viewing:
Registered Usermbardeen

Show comments:

Per page:

Order:

Comments:


Comments Made by mbardeen
Pages:   ... ...
Showing 271 - 280 of ~394
Image Comment
Time flies
04/03/2003 05:01:00 PM
Time flies
by xertion

Comment:
You know... I take my minor nitpick back. I just realized that the reflection makes the clock look like it has wings.. I like it more now!
Photographer found comment helpful.
Counting Down Time  with a Paper Chain
04/03/2003 03:46:00 PM
Counting Down Time with a Paper Chain
by sabal5

Comment:
Greets from the Critique Club:

Initial impression:
Nice colors, distracting shadows, jumbled composition.

Challenge:
I admit that I didn't see the connection to time when I voted on this picture, but after reading the comments I now see the connection. Very creative and neat idea. I remember those days fondly.. Unfortunately I've found it doesn't pay to be too creative around here.

Composition/Creativity:
I'm not sure what to say here. The composition feels jumbled and messy, but I have a feeling that's caused by the shadows.

Technical/Post-Processing:
This is where this photo lets me down. The flash is far too harsh. Try more light without the flash nexttime!

Overall:
Not a strong/apparent enough reference to time. Flash. Good idea and great colors though!

-Matt
Photographer found comment helpful.
Frozen Time
04/03/2003 01:14:18 PM
Frozen Time
by bosniak

Comment:
Greets from the Critique Club:

Initial impression:
Cold, nice idea, missing something

Composition/Creativity:
This is a good idea and I like that in a photo. The composition is good, though I think I'd like to see more space around the sides of the subject. The reflection adds interest but also clutters the photo a little.

Technical/Postprocessing:
Exposure and lighting are very good, the a bit more contrast could have been added in post processing to add that extra little bit of punch.

Overall:
Great idea, executed well. Should have scored higher in my opinion! Keep up the good work!

-Matt
Photographer found comment helpful.
Stormy Times
04/02/2003 07:23:04 PM
Stormy Times
by OneSweetSin

Comment:
Greets from the Critique Club!

Initial Impression:
Interesting composition, colors seem a bit off, focus seems soft.

Challenge:
Meets the challenge fine

Composition/Creativity:
This is the strongest point of this photo in my opinion. The angle that you shot this at is very interesting... Diagonals tend to make pictures seem more dynamic and it does just that in this picture. My only problem is the tree.. It clutters the view. I would prefer to just see the clock and the clouds! I think it would have give the photo a cleaner look and much more visual impact!

Technical/Post processing:
The exposure is good in my opinion. Some may say the sky is a bit underexposed, but that just serves to frame the clock, good job. For some reason this photo feels fuzzy to me, I think an unsharpen-mask would have sharpened things up and removed that minor irritation.

Overall:
An interesting photo, good eye! If it was clean and simple, it would have had more of the "wow" factor.. Keep up the good work!

-Matt
Triptych: Old Faded Emotions
04/02/2003 04:34:57 PM
Triptych: Old Faded Emotions
by kosmikkreeper

Comment:
Greets from the critique club:

This is an ingeneous idea and I really like the way you've done it. It took me a little while to figure out how exactly you did it, but I think I know now. (Or at least I know how I'd do it!)

Of course, this pic meets the challenge very well. Techinically it's outstanding, however I have two main gripes. One, the emotions do seem very forced. Two, on the picture on the right I don't like the intensity of the light. Other than that this is perfect.


Good job!

-Matt

Photographer found comment helpful.
Snowboard Symmetry on Corduroy
04/02/2003 12:08:51 PM
Snowboard Symmetry on Corduroy
by smfsnowind

Comment:
I'm not sure if I like this or not.. It has a rather strange appeal to it but I'm not sure about the post processing. I really like the colors though!
Light
04/02/2003 11:59:51 AM
Light
by PixelatedVisions

Comment:
Interesting perspective! I even like the coloring..
Photographer found comment helpful.
Reflections of interest
04/02/2003 11:58:36 AM
Reflections of interest1st Place
by xertion

Comment:
Good lord this is just wonderful! The clouds, the reflections, the illusions. I can't think of anything I'd change about it. Great Job!
Photographer found comment helpful.
Reflected Light
04/02/2003 11:54:42 AM
Reflected Light
by Clou9

Comment:
Don't like theborder at all. The rest of the picture seems a bit dark, but I like the concept!
Night Tourist
04/02/2003 11:53:26 AM
Night Tourist
by blemt

Comment:
If this was bigger it would get a really high score from me, as it is I'll give it a 6
Photographer found comment helpful.
Pages:   ... ...
Showing 271 - 280 of ~394


Home - Challenges - Community - League - Photos - Cameras - Lenses - Learn - Help - Terms of Use - Privacy - Top ^
DPChallenge, and website content and design, Copyright © 2001-2025 Challenging Technologies, LLC.
All digital photo copyrights belong to the photographers and may not be used without permission.
Current Server Time: 08/05/2025 07:32:14 AM EDT.