Another Egg Bites the Dust
by Pug-H

Comment:
The composition isn't very strong, but the lighting is nice.

final resting place
by fisheye

Comment:
The lighting is a little harsh - it might be a good idea to wait until a different time of day, such as evening or morning. ideally a cloudy, over cast day would be best for a nice soft light, but perhaps you want that lovely blue sky.

Why must the innocent fall?
by Puckzzz

Comment:
I like the colors and the concept.

Tilt
by h2

Comment:
Neat lighting and colors.

Fallen Tear
by LMA128

Comment:
:) The colors are sweet and shallow DOF beautiful.

The Harvester of Fallen Souls
by toddhead

Comment:
Very creative and interesting. That reflection of the flames in the glasses adds the perfect touch.

broken
by Kelli

Comment:
This is just a thought, but I wonder how this might look if you could see more of the hand, and if that white strap on the bottom were out of the photo. It's a little distracting. I like the concept here though - the details of the dirt and the wrinkles on the skin are awesome. It's just that the composition is a little weak.

Fallen Heroes
by Wenders11

Comment:
Beautiful and well-done. You chose the perfect time of day to do this in - the golden light catching the dew on the grass, and the fog in the distance is lovely.

Fallen Brothers
by dssagent88

Comment:
IMO the composition is kind of cluttered and confusing. My eyes aren't sure were to rest. I think it might help if the man were in a different placing, and not cropped in half. Perhaps place him off to one side of the photo, and have him get a little closer to the camera, and place him at an angle where he is looking at the monument but you can see his face in the picture... Just a thought.

Awesome Fall Dude !
by kenskid

Comment:
Nice colors.