Future Model
by moumeeta

Comment:
Supposed to be a studio shot. Sorry, but this is not and DNMC.

The Lady in Red
by ashishkushwaha

Comment:
Pretty lady. Where is the studio? DNMC.

All Sweetness and Light
by RKT

Comment:
I stand by my first comment on this page during the challenge. 12th is great, but it should have been much higher. Take comfort in knowing this shot has fans. Great job. :)

Androgyny
by vogue

Comment:
I recommend reading the rules in the future. Unfortunate, but you check a box during submission asking you if you read and followed the rules. Since you're new to challenges I would read them each time you submit as I used to just to be clear that you followed them all for each challenge type. In time you will know what is allowed under basic or advanced without even looking.

Good luck in your future entries. :)

Victoria's Secret
by Dudski

Comment:
Good clarity, great low key shot, strong diagonal across the image with her body and just enough of her face to peak curiosity. 8

A little less comfortable...
by Tygerr

Comment:
Yes, that looks uncomfortable, yet sexy as hell. I like the simplicity of the background that focuses your attention on the model (not that it's hard to do with a pretty girl such as her). I also like the overall muted tones of the scene with the earth tones of the wall, tile and molding as well as her garments. Nice job. 8

All Sweetness and Light
by RKT

Comment:
There is something about this that I like very much. The light color and texture of the wall, the depth of field and focus that puts most of your attention on the bra, and the almost mystical glow (like afterglow) of light that highlights the under garment and also leads you to the bed. A bit sultry, A bit romantic, and a bit mystical all at the same time. Nice control over the highlights as well. I also like the window light sets off the fragile detail of the bra. Well done. 9

Linen and Lingerie
by lucky_85

Comment:
The lighting in the upper left is too harsh, and the lower left is too dark with no detail on her hair. Not going to get good results in this photo using matrix or evaluative metering. Perhaps partial or center weighted metering would have been more effective if your camera supports it. Seems like you also used an ISO that was too high in order to get a faster shutter speed or it's long exposure. In either case it created a very grainy and noisy texture to everything in the photo including her skin and the linens.

Nice attempt, but I'm afraid the best I can give you is a 4.

All Laced Up
by ekmai

Comment:
A little blown out on her right thigh and hand, but I do like the overall B&W tones and exposure. Not sure if it's a reflection of a light, flash or something else going on with her right thumb nail, but it's distracting to me.

Overall a strong image, but maybe the use of soft light or flash compensation to reduce the highlights a little more would have helped here. 7

On the ceiling fan is where they normally end up
by Lad

Comment:
Cute idea, but you didn't quite pull it off. Not liking the DOF between the hanging garments and it seems kind of thrown together in a couple of minutes just to get something submitted. Sorry, not trying to offend here.

For what it's worth, I think you should have gone with the same concept, but taken a shot of the room with the ceiling fan in one of the rule of third intersecting points preferably with a bed beneath it in the background (un-made and russled up of course) with just one garment such as the bra hanging down. I would have also considered making it a B&W or dark sepia tone to pull it all together. Good luck!