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Night Breath
11/01/2006 03:02:07 PM
Night Breath
by Mark

Comment:
I consider a portrait as a representation of some aspect of the subject (which I would expect to be living but I suppose doesn't have to be). While this is an interesting picture, I do not feel that I am learning anything about the subject.
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"Rabble Rabble!"
11/01/2006 02:56:57 PM
"Rabble Rabble!"
by BeeCee

Comment:
Harsh lighting. Try softening it some.
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Artist's Studio
11/01/2006 02:56:02 PM
Artist's Studio
by RiderGal

Comment:
Great shot. I feel like this just isn't a photo but a window into this artist's life. If I could make a few changes, I would remove the white notepad in the center bottom of the image and have the artist just a little more centered. The fisheye distorts the subject just a little too much for my taste.
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reflection
11/01/2006 02:52:09 PM
reflection
by mreza

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Excellent composition (except for the thick tree? coming out of the top of the subjects head). I would also try to get more light on the subjects face. Maybe a reflector would help here.
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The Gentle Giant
11/01/2006 02:48:46 PM
The Gentle Giant
by BlackNewfs

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I like your creativeness in choosing black and white for this photo. It shows the two tones of the dogs fur very well. However, I find the background too light and distracting from the subject. I would try to use a different location that has a darker background or place a filter (a digital one would work here) that darkens the background.
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Look Back Without Anger
11/01/2006 02:45:32 PM
Look Back Without Anger
by unicum

Comment:
Too much negative space. With the subjects right ear off the edge, it almost looks like the negative space is pushing her off. Also seems like a bit too much post-processing. The skin color doesn't look right. But I do really enjoy the gaze. It looks very natural. Good job capturing that with this photo.
Size Matters
11/01/2006 02:42:43 PM
Size Matters
by alifeinexile

Comment:
I find the model has too many shadows on her face and neck. I also find the close foot to be too distracting. My eye always ends up wandering over to it and I don't find the bottom of the shoe is visually appealing. But on the plus side, I very much like the idea - keep working on it.
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'Heaven'
11/01/2006 01:25:22 AM
'Heaven'
by Fyzarl

Comment:
I love this shot. I find Ansel Adams minimized the clutter in his photos and yours has none. I think it should have done much better than it did. I would give it a 9. Well done.
Gaze
10/01/2006 01:38:46 AM
Gaze
by elsapo

Comment:
I love the lighting on the subject except I'm thrown off by the two sparkles I see in the eyes. I somehow expect to one see one.
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The Ooze!
09/27/2006 01:39:38 AM
The Ooze!
by jrdawson

Comment:
For those who don't quite get it, I was trying to portray how modern electrical devices cause pollution by leaking toxic chemicals into our environment.
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