Childhood Friends
by OneSweetSin

Comment:
Good idea, but seems very blurry overall. Also, the leading lines don't point at /one/ object. I think the image would have beena lot stronger ifyou had had only one train on the round thingie. (4)

Rows
by robbieh

Comment:
When you only have 640 pixels to use, why use so many on a border? Interesting leading lines, but I can't really tell what they are leading to. (4)

The Tracks
by zadore

Comment:
Nive picture, but the sharpening done here is far from subtle, and although you have great leading lines, the lines lead to nowhere (3)

Good egg
by clues56

Comment:
Nice picture, but the background is very disturbing. (6)

Yellow left-over piece
by johnmk

Comment:
As a photograph, this is pretty sweet. However, there are a few things that are worth saying: have a look along the top - you seem to be having some severe barrel distortion (the line along the top - the two windows in particular). You can solve this by zooming in a little bit (I am assuming you shot this on full wide angle?) and walking further back. If you look at the bottom of the building, your camera was a few degrees to the left also - both are really composition issues, but they do make the pic look a bit scruffy, I think.

As for the picture itself: Great shot, but not a lot of yellow - which was probably what cost you a place in the top10 this week. Keep trying! :)

Juicy Splash
by theonlysilentbob

Comment:
Critique club

This is a pretty interesting picture, but it leaves a few things to be desired, I think. Sharpness is fine, but a shutter time of 1/60 really doesn't cut it in this case - it means you have to use your flash, but in general, it is a better idea to put LOTS of light on your scene (300w floodlights are good), and then use a 1/2000 shutter time. The idea itself was pretty good, but orange juice is generally.. eh.. orange :) Just nitpicking - A very nice picture indeed, but it lacks a sense of focus (not technically, rather composition-wise), which probably cost you a place in the top 10 this time.

Good luck further!

Goodbye world.
by Geocide

Comment:
Writing a suicide note with a sharpie? God, man, at least have the decency to use a fountain pen or something else classy. :P Sorry, couldn't help myself. Good image, but it doesn't really show a sense of urgency and despair. The writing is calm and the grip of the pen is firm and calm.. Not a bad shot, though. (6)

Our Future
by smellyfish1002

Comment:
An good (albeit not very original) idea that is ruined by the heavy over exposure. Try again! (4)

Think Globally
by alanfreed

Comment:
A good image, but the reflection on the middle of the globe makes it look as if you used a flash. Flashes are bad. Use a diffused light source, preferrably from one or more of the sides, to give it a rounder feel. Nice shot and subtle sepiatoning though. (8)

Reflected Rose
by kandyj

Comment:
Try to be a little bit more creative with your lighting, and make sure you get a wider tonal range than this. Also, using a longer shutter time and smaller aperture might have helped you to get it all sharp. Also try to use a good level of USM. (4)