midnight rushby
redswedeComment: critique club ;)
congrats on your first challenge
you had a difficult task combing the the light subject and the dark background
on my screen the background is so dark i can not really make out what it is
which detracts from the context
IMO it would been more effective if the background had been slightly brighter but out of focus with a shallow dof
same for the lost shoe i did not realize what it was until i read the pics comments
its a fine line between making your viewers work for the details and having the details missed
i have had the same happen to me where the meaning of the pic was totally lost because what i thought was an obvious detail was missed by many
as for Cinderella you did a nice job capturing the detail in the white dress while keeping good skin tones
for me i would have like to seen more of the models face with it being the focal point as opposed to the model in general
a great first challenge effort
hope to see you in many more
neil