Signature Eyebrow
by JuliBoc

Comment:
The eyebrows are nice. I like the DOF and how crazy they are. They eye is disturbing. It just freaks me out from this distance.

Body Part
by GeneralE

Comment:
Just not an appealing photograph. The crop is bothersome.

Direction South
by pjotre7

Comment:
You have a decent landscape shot and great capture of the birds. The body part actually distracts from the whole photo. It almost loooks like the hand was in there on accident.

obcese with the past
by marcoesquivel

Comment:
I'm assuming you meant for it to look like an old shool polaroid. I think it's too blurry and has entirely too much noise. your mixed lighting (the lamp and the window, don't blend well either.

H70 C
by NikonJeb

Comment:
You are probably getting killed for this, but in my eyes, the challenge was to use parts of the HUMAN body. While this is a replication of human, it's not a human. I think your lighting is great, the metal disc on the arm with the writing takes away from the photo.

Decisions
by outofthisnature

Comment:
I understand the concept and you are probably having other people tell you this. The challenge was to use the human body. While this is a replication of a human, it's not human. Aside from DNMC, looking at the photo itself, you have some harsh lights and shadows across the face that takes away from the photo.

Schoolkid
by gsal

Comment:
I think you captured a great shot here. The crop is just great. I love the colors added by the knit cap. I'd like to have see you focus on her youth. Under her eyes there seems to be bags as if she were crying....you can clone those out and give it more a youthful look. I would have also liked to see the small scar under her nose cloned out. Here eyes look great. They really engage the viewer. I think a pass of the dodge tool over the iris' would have bought them out more. The DOF of the shot really adds to it. Overall a great shot.

Now if you are trying to showcase the look of a schoolgirl from a certain country....ignore everything I just said. lol.

Message edited by author 2010-01-31 15:57:29.

Cafe Conversations
by njsabs

Comment:
Great use of window light. I think you captured a great photo here. Overblowin' the window was a great idea to keep all focus indoors. Under the table there are a couple of small "dots" that look like they are part of the leg. But because of the darkness of the photo it looks like they are just floating in the air. I would consider cloning them out. But that is all that I can see wrong with the photo.

Memories of Freida
by njsabs

Comment:
I love the lighting and DOF. I think your vignette around the edges worked great for the photo. Black and white was perfect for the shot. If I were to nitpick I would say to reduce the number of moles on her face to really give her youth (although keeping them says this is what she looks like).

Farmer on a winter morning
by bnilesh

Comment:
Nilesh....great photo. I love the details you capture in the faces of your subject.