Pop Beads
by connie

Comment:
It's really hard to do the constructive criticism thing when you're looking at me like that. Great eyes and smile. The tones are excellent, too. I'd really like to see this in portrait orientation so you could include all of your hand (oh, yeah... your pose is very good, too) and at least the feeling of the top of your head, Even if it blends with the bg, I'd like there to be just a little more room. Digging for nits, I could do without the clasp on the beads, and the highlights on the glasses show some oversharpening. Very nice work.

adjust
by kidtetris

Comment:
This would make a great B/W. Tack sharp.

Split personalitiy
by kongleng

Comment:
The lighting could be better, but that's some smooth move. Try to save your .jpeg closer to 150kb - should smooth things out a little. Nice.

when i think i'm fatter
by karutune

Comment:
Here's an image you can fall into. The depth of field is huge. Great colors, too. The toes of your sneaks are a little burnt out, and I could do witout the camera strap, but what's lacking technically is offset by the positives. Nice work.

T.V. Bob
by bobgaither

Comment:
You don't *look* like a transvestite. ;-) I kind of like the idea of you and the tube, but I think you'd have a stronger image without the overexposure on your face and reflection on the screen. How about tuning the tv to some static, and using a polarizer? I'd take the speaker and candles off the set, too.

rockstar rockstar where have you been
by heartsdivide

Comment:
Hmmm... there's a whole lot "wrong" with this picture - flat tones, cropped head and hand, all that space on the R, shadows on the cheesy backdrop, etc., but I'll give you the benefit of the doubt on the motion blur. That said, it's got that "so bad it's good" thing going on in a way. Kind of like the cr@p production values on Bob Marley recordings - adds flavor. Cropped square from the right and with more contrast and a gamma adjustment, you'd have a nice back for a CD. Need a bass player?

dole, ispod mojih nogu...
by gingibash

Comment:
fantastic bit of perspective play! your pose is interesting, too - introspective with a sense of motion. i wouldn't mind the composition a little more off-center - maybe 15% off the left added to the right so you'd get more of the dwarf city and get yourself onto a third.

The Color Wheel
by langdon

Comment:
Looks like they're having a meeting. Nicely done.

paint
by d1h_nikonuser

Comment:
Nice setup and good technicals (although I really don't like oof foregrounds). Have to ask myself why the berries are in the paint can, though. What are you trying to say?

Tomatoe Amore
by JJart

Comment:
Nice, but the oof bottle kind of makes me cringe.